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Old Age

________________________________________________ Tomorrow is a birthday of the gravest consequence... Proclivity denied in me the ancient, awful truth but I now see quite clearly from the Crone's side of the fence, the aperture slam shut upon the saga of my youth I feel the marrow turn to dust inside each drying bone, all nuance of fertility drains from my barren womb I pray that in my final hours, I won't be left alone to hear the bells a-tolling, as now, I'm aware for whom! I'm bound to be quite feeble, if I make it past the day Please, look in on me often to attest that I am fine It's with temerity, though, that I hold on, anyway, with luck, perhaps I'll see the ripe old age of twenty-nine... ________________________________________________ 10/29/2018

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:10:00 AM
Lycia, I enjoyed reading and love the way you used the 8 words . The body has to grow old and I hate it. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:54:00 PM
Congrats Lycia on a fine placement!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/30/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, John. Fun and most challenging contest - keep 'em comin'! LyLy xoxo
Date: 11/27/2018 8:18:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Lycia - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season - ah, to be so "old" again! ;-) <3
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Date: 11/6/2018 12:52:00 PM
Wonderful write. Great take on the aging process. Enjoyed immensely.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/6/2018 1:31:00 PM
Hahaha! Thank you, Frank. It's for a contest in which we had to use eight specific words. Fun! xoxo
Date: 10/29/2018 11:41:00 AM
29? Sooo old. I was expecting a climatic ending of a wizened person but you fool me! A great poem, Lycia
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Lycia Harding
Date: 10/29/2018 1:09:00 PM
Hahaha! Fooled ya- It's just a melodramatic young GIRL. Thanks, Ralph! xoxo

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