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Oil Spilled Out

Conglomeration of fragmented oil Angry spirits burst forth grotesque faces as on an oil painting exploding all hopes The angry beasts of yesteryears Carelessness cease to care for the incredible burden as hopes fade away and life dies Anger seeps into the millenium crawl spaces of yesteryear and holes of tomorrow to stare irresponsibility in the face of bp Oil spilled out in brains And as a new light shines on trauma for the holes of humanity....... "Save the last of the last after the blast!" And the Ocean cries out to cleanse itself and rid itself of the anguish of the human made fringe experience...out of the norm of normal as America only truly is!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/12/2019 4:20:00 AM
Oil spilled out in brains And as a new light shines on trauma for the holes of humanity......./// great expression
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win Susan, what a lovely and honest write about todays chaos involving us all, big and small! much love!
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win in S K A T 's contest "Oil Spilled Out Anger ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:13:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this exceptional write and super win today... enjoy another sweet victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 3:57:00 AM
A fine entry to the contest. Good luck
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Date: 7/22/2010 3:38:00 PM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2010 12:06:00 PM
Great entry Susan for the Gulf Oil Spill Irma's contest.. speaks volumes as to the outrage and anger with this tragedy.. my entry for Irma is SEE No Evil...HEAR No Evil... SPEAK No Evil.. WAKE UP AND SMELL THE OIL... expresses lots from those affected most.. wild and sea life, land, people.. good luck my friend.. with luv..
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