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A big heart that only knows how to grow taller a life full of grace and fulfillment even when it goes lower immeasurable challenges, yet you crush them all with one premolar you shine your light so bright for a bottomless pit to experience solar. Your Cinderella voice turns every moment to Christmas and Salah, I am so used to its tenderness for Mariah Carey to sound like Godzilla. The angels responsible for your memorable day are twin sisters with power one is beautiful, dressed in the moon whose name is Isabella, the other outshines the sparkles of all Galaxies and she is called Emmanuella. The colourful package with passionate hugs will be delivered by Mr. Miller and he has been strictly instructed not to lose a single flower. I have paid already and everlasting Joy is the biller so rejoice my lovely friend and disturb the streets with your ohh-la-la! Agents of all goodness, come together at your doorstep to holla wishing you many more years of love, goodness and satisfaction Happy birthday my beautiful friend… Hurray!... Ohhh la la!

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Date: 9/3/2021 6:30:00 PM
A beautiful poem to have received by your friend on her birthday Funom, a lucky lady… Belle
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/20/2021 5:46:00 AM
Thank you so muh Belle
Date: 5/7/2021 3:57:00 PM
So beautiful! She is a lucky lady to be presented with such an amazing birthday poem. I am sure she is very special! Best wishes, Dear Poet ~ Mala
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2021 4:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Malabika Ray
Date: 4/28/2021 8:55:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful birthday write and picture. One special lady. Hope she loved it. Have a blessed day.................
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/28/2021 4:08:00 PM
Yeah, she did and I was so glad... Thank you very much Paula.
Date: 4/28/2021 5:26:00 AM
A most delightful birthday dedication, Funom. I hope she gets to read this! ~ Regards // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/28/2021 4:08:00 PM
Yes Paul... she did and we are all very happy. Thank you very much for your comment.
Date: 4/28/2021 5:25:00 AM
Quite a great write with its descriptiveness and rhyming. Crafted very well.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/28/2021 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert
Date: 4/26/2021 6:20:00 AM
WoW! Funom, What a fantastic birthday write for your friend; I'm sure she just loved it. Well done. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/27/2021 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis... I really appreciate this

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