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Ohhh I Gonna Find That Man

Just one more stand Make it a brand new day A little bit smitten am I I want to make him my man The beginning to end Thoughts making me hazy Leaves me weakening to the touch That is my sweet man Kneeling to my knees Turning and turning on that carousel Ohhh....... I want to love that man He is so fine Putty in my hands On a mission with care Headed everywhere Ohhh…... I love that man OH…....I can hardly breathe Separate from the sky Ohhh..... just one more time To hold me and take me to his stand I want that man Just one night like this I never had With tongues that flame so high Ohhh...... I want that man Come as you are The smoke is getting higher and higher He is the ace you never thought OHHH...... you want to touch Would this be enough…. Oh yes….. I want that man Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/13/2014 1:08:00 PM
Hey, when you find him...let me know how it works out...as this might possibly be a figment of your imagination...loved your words...
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/13/2014 3:19:00 PM
ha ha... hello KJ. I sure will.. I have had a hard time finding the one I want..lol never hurts to try though,..
Date: 5/12/2014 11:22:00 AM
enjoyed the dizzy, giddy feel of this piece, brooke.. he's gong to be the one to find you.. delightful!.. huggs
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/12/2014 11:26:00 AM
thank you Nette... you are so kind hugs

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