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Oh What the Hell

I really don't feel like writing The day was hot, and I don't feel well And I can't think of a thing to say But, Oh what the hell I shouldn't bother, I should relax Don't even have a story to tell I should go in and take a shower But, Oh what the hell So there, I wrote it and it stinks They'll turn away to avoid the smell If I were smart I wouldn't post this But, Oh what the hell !

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/3/2018 8:35:00 PM

G'day Jerry … if a writer doesn't go through a tunnel from time to time, then they're hardly a writer at all. The good thing about this is, there is a light at the end of the tunnel - enjoyed your verse Jerry - Lindsay

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/2/2018 11:20:00 AM

Who hasn't felt like this, fun stuff Jerry, I love it...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2018 9:25:00 PM

It made me laugh Jerry and I am happy you posted it! Every creation doesn't have to be this profound piece of work! Thanks for the humor! : )

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2018 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Connie I know every creation will not be profound but I sure look forward to writing one someday lol

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/31/2018 7:28:00 PM

I am laughing and learning and loving this poem, Jerry! I am SO GLAD you honored us by trusting us with it.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/31/2018 6:00:00 PM

Hello Jerry T. Curtis, You wrote the feelings you were feeling at the time. Sometimes it is hard to create a poem when the words do not come out. Keep on creating your poetry.Have a nice evening my friend. Nice to meet you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2018 1:19:00 PM

Your welcome my friend.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2018 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Darlene