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Oh Lord

cast me into shadow throw me to the hell my loyalty has been questioned against my will my love has no love for me now tell me why always me and how? no reason to live in this dreary world my devotions my prayers my artistic persuasions take away all I have now there is no need to live with a pensive heart no reason to proclaim while I have been disdained with my open heart i beg you now tell you to tell him I loved, only loved but cast me into shadow throw me to the hell sorry all of u ...and i beg u guys just forgive me for this mundane piece.....sorry again !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/15/2016 10:51:00 AM
A moment of indecision, dejection and rejection...very sad, Smriti. We have to learn not to give up but rely on hope and faith; pain could quite easily turn to joy! // paul
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:29:00 PM
We all feel like this at one time or another! You expressed your feelings well!
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:09:00 PM
very impassioned please Smriti .. your expressions are very eloquent my friend.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:46:00 PM
meaningful atonement, smriti
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