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I am a ghost, vapor drifting among the mass's. An inconsequential color in the portrait of life. Seeking... ever seeking, reaching open hand for the rain of success. In bitter taste, failure taints my pallet. I scream from within, hear me, see me in offer unconditional. Success teeters on the fringe of vision, receding with every timid step to torment in sweet song. All consuming in my quest, soul afire rages. I continue to walk the path of coals and ash, for I am. 4/21/16

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Date: 5/11/2017 8:47:00 AM
This is superb work, Robert!
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 5/11/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Sara for the read and kind comment
Date: 5/10/2017 6:42:00 PM
ROBERT! This is one excellent poem. I am so sorry for the most ridiculous delay EVER in closing this contest. Your poem is incredible. Thank you for submitting this to my contest... I am wowed by what you did with brevity, the intensity of it all... and your last line shone.
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 5/11/2017 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for a placement Cyndi and the opportunity to explore this muse

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