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Ode To Lua

Ode to Lua, my dog. Lua was lost, she was gone. I wanted to be gone with her. She was my last, my lost child, my full heart. Confused I was, I had to get up. No reason to wake up. Loneliness crosses my mind. My soul is empty. Questions and answers. I don't have my dog. We crossed together so many bridges, that nobody can understand. We both climbed mountains, but we went down. Black and white, skin and bones. Dark and light, both together, only one. Eating a big meal at Christmas time we were. Sleeping on the edge to nowhere, we warmed each other. Discovering new cities, new beaches, new horizons. Just me and you. You were flying into another dimension, and I didn't know. You talked to me, but I didn't want to listen. You weren't there the next day. I will regret the rest of my life. You, my Lua, my everything, my nowhere to be found, my everything to look for.

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Date: 3/27/2023 12:39:00 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Maria, and congratulations on your placement! :)
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 3/27/2023 1:24:00 AM
Hello BJ. Thanks to you for giving us the opportunity of the contest, that's the best. Have a nice day.
Date: 1/12/2023 12:04:00 PM
Hello Marie, oh so sad that you lost your dog. At least you have good memories of her. When we lose a pet it is a sad time. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2023 12:25:00 PM
Hello Marie, you will always remember Lua. Because she was part of your life .You now have Laura she will fill the empties you feel of losing Lura. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/12/2023 12:12:00 PM
Hello Darlene, How r you doing. Here it's night time. Lua was other dog that I had before the one I have now. I had it per 13 years. She was as a person. I miss her a lot. The one I have now it's called Lara. Ok. Have a nice day.

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