October

Crackling leaf carpets, Static chill touches the neck, Autumn, bids farewell.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2011 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Aseem. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 8/2/2011 3:23:00 AM

Sensational Haiku, Aseem. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Aseem. Love, Carol

Fabiyas M V

Date: 10/30/2010 11:18:00 AM

Dear Aseem,I like the way you welcme winter.Small and fair.Fabiyas

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2010 11:16:00 AM

May your weekend be one of amazing inspiration Aseem. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love and blessings always, Carol

Date: 10/30/2010 7:39:00 AM

Nice use of personification and imagery for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/29/2010 4:00:00 PM

Creative write to say goodbye autumn and welcome winter which is round the corner, Aseem

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/29/2010 2:45:00 PM

WOW, Im shocked I am the first to comment on this beautifully written Haiku...Michael