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October

October smiled sweetly as colours began to change from her green dress of summer she changed into a multi coloured layer as she spun around in glee she showed off her ware reds, oranges and golds bright and bold for eyes to behold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/15/2020 5:53:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … while you prepare for winter, we are greening up with a multitude of colours with blooms, and of course; warmer weather - thank you Phyllis - stay safe and warm - Lindsay
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Date: 9/15/2020 2:37:00 PM
Beautifully written Phyl. I can see her swirling around blowing the leaves. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/10/2020 1:02:00 PM
Splendid verse, Phyllis - you write of my favorite season of the year - Bob
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Date: 9/10/2020 11:28:00 AM
What gorgeous imagery! Beautiful metaphor!
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Date: 9/10/2020 11:04:00 AM
- Yes, a really beautiful dress, Phyllis :) - Hope everything is well with you ... enjoy the autumn ... it has arrived :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2020 10:15:00 AM
I could see her whirling with all the delight of Autumn!
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