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Ocean waves loudly crashing on shore mercifully drown cares~ bring peace 5/5/2019 Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku - Poetry Contest Dear Heart, Sponsor

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Date: 5/19/2019 5:26:00 AM
The ocean is a great expression of divine power ... it teaches us lessons of humility and love! Beautiful poetry to your dear Awtry salute alkas
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Date: 5/19/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Alkas. -ps
Date: 5/14/2019 10:17:00 AM
PS congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love the image too!
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Date: 5/14/2019 10:30:00 AM
thank you for your kind words. glad you liked it. :)
Date: 5/14/2019 9:46:00 AM
Many congrats PS on your win. I love the sounds of the sea, so calming and restorative when my soul feels troubled and I am so lucky to live beside it, walking there each day. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 5/14/2019 10:32:00 AM
Living by the sea! what a blessing! Thank you for reading and commenting :)
Date: 5/14/2019 3:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 5/14/2019 9:23:00 AM
it was a skin of the teeth finish! Thank you Sunshine! :) ~ps
Date: 5/13/2019 6:39:00 PM
very nice one. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 5/13/2019 6:56:00 PM
I am glad you liked it. -ps
Date: 5/7/2019 1:44:00 PM
P.S. Beautifully written. It reminds me of peaceful sunsets I've enjoyed on Dauphin Island Ala.
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Date: 5/7/2019 2:25:00 PM
Nothing like some beach therapy :) Thank you so much! ~ps
Date: 5/7/2019 6:39:00 AM
A lovely word-painting with vibrant imagery; well done and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/7/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you very much ML :) ~ps
Date: 5/7/2019 4:37:00 AM
Love this, good luck in the contest, well done!
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Date: 5/7/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Tania :) ~ps
Date: 5/7/2019 4:14:00 AM
- Harmonic and beautiful, P.S. :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:22:00 AM
O wow, thank you Anne-Lise -ps
Date: 5/7/2019 3:21:00 AM
Mind lblowing Panagiota
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota -ps
Date: 5/6/2019 6:49:00 PM
Thanks for reading my work, Best to you.
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Date: 5/7/2019 7:10:00 AM
My pleasure. I always enjoy your writing! :) ~ps
Date: 5/6/2019 6:44:00 PM
Simply stunning, P.S. I felt your poem to my core. Inspiring poetry. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/6/2019 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, very much Susan.
Date: 5/6/2019 4:39:00 PM
It is amazing how fast water changes from crashing to peaceful. Soup Mail my friend.
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Date: 5/6/2019 7:29:00 PM
Kinda wondering if crashing is too strong a word..,
Date: 5/6/2019 3:14:00 PM
I felt peace come over me as I was reading this great poem! Thanks
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:46:00 PM
Oh, I am glad. Thank you so much for saying so :)
Date: 5/6/2019 2:21:00 PM
Peaceful waters, even when crashing. Love it. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:46:00 PM
It "drowns" out your thoughts. The sight, smell, feel, it "overwhelms" your senses. I highly recommend when faced with the inevitable punch-in-the-gut times of life, a trip to sit on a beach. Thank you :)
Date: 5/6/2019 8:45:00 AM
gorgeous.
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Date: 5/6/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :) ~ps
Date: 5/6/2019 8:31:00 AM
Lovely, PS.
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Date: 5/6/2019 9:50:00 PM
Thank you, Line. I am glad you liked it :)
Date: 5/6/2019 2:35:00 AM
It certainly brings you peace, the sound of the ocean, so soothing Tom. Good luck.
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Date: 5/6/2019 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Tom.

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