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Ocean

I'm an ocean deep and wide you never know what's going to come inside wrote 5/ 25/ 2018 Fri. 4.15pm

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Anil Deo

Date: 11/23/2021 7:20:00 AM

I came inside your poem ... but YOU are an Ocean or two or three ... away. shalom, shalom: Thanksgiving & CHRISTmas blessings Debbie. U are missed. anil Deo

Judy Ball

Date: 9/17/2019 8:25:00 PM

The ocean deep, mysterious, beautiful. Nice job. God Bless, JB

John Castellenas

Date: 3/6/2019 3:42:00 AM

Great description of the ocean. You said everything needed in the few words Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2018 6:54:00 PM

I really like a short poem like this with a profound message!

Bette Bavington

Date: 9/17/2018 1:17:00 PM

You could of been talking about people. We all absorb things some good and some bad. Short sweet and right to the point. I hope you have a good day.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/22/2018 12:28:00 PM

Hey there! Another beautiful expansive thought. Simple and yet so unassuming. Of course this has other meanings to those of us who are obsessed with sexual metaphors. Can I be the only one? I imagine not, but I am comfortable enough to say it. I actually like thinking about how unbiased and accepting this appears to what happens to us each day.

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/27/2018 2:04:00 PM

swallow me up if you must....but i can swim, in that you can trust....i will escape before the sky turns dark....because i am a realest, i stay away from sharks....lol....cute work debbie....;)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/26/2018 2:29:00 AM

What a passionate little gem - love it! :-)

Duncan Chappell

Date: 7/24/2018 11:11:00 AM

so very true love the passion thank you god bless duncan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/3/2018 2:07:00 AM

A delightful metaphor, Debbie! Have a nice day:) Regards // paul

Lyric Man

Date: 6/8/2018 11:14:00 PM

Nice write, Debbie!

Therese Bacha

Date: 6/8/2018 9:07:00 PM

Wow Debbie i read it i felt so relaxed afterwards. Its me Terry i am back after a depression relieve. Hope to be able to stay here like before, it was so much fun. Hugs Terry xoxo

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 8:07:00 AM

Awesome poem!! (: simply beautiful