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'obscured View'

When it looks like the fire inside were doused Do you pretend not to notice? Do you try and lit it up again? Will you walk away without a second thought? Knowing that when you saw her “that day” She had a smile that said I am me Comfortable Receptive In my own skin Do you probe for the reason behind the death stare? When all she needed was to know you care That you noticed her smile has disappeared That the shadow of troubles was floating in the air She just needed you to listen Perhaps hold her hand Not to judge her When she felt a little bruised In all this she might need a hug Will you be there? Will you turn your back? Will you walk away? With the pretense that everything is still okay
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:25:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:51:00 PM
A very searching write here Wilma, a lot of people will identify with parts of this, as do I also there are other parts that touch emotions we can't quite grasp again, its good to have stopped by, God bless.'
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:09:00 AM
We all do it Wilma, take the one we love for granted . Then comes the day we get the death stare and a dozen roses can't fix it. Nice reality check Wilma. Blessings Carl
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Date: 1/21/2016 11:37:00 PM
wilma great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:42:00 PM
- Lovely poem, dear Wilma - need a hug :) // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:22:00 AM
Nicely expressed, Wilma. When you truly love someone your vision is not obscured by anything.
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