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O, My America

an eagle in flight o’er the Colorado Rocky Mountains embraces freedom- soaring o’er states in sight with might, searching for a way togetherness can shine; the United States of America, you are beautified when patriotic unity brings ease- (a red, white and blue flag flaps in the Chicago breeze…)
o, my America, land of independent sovereignty- may medallion sunsets in the west blaze over the desert in the heat of Arizona, and the four seasons riveting Michigan bring excitement- i pray that deliverance from war be our latitude; may we search and find harmony and accord
for i am but an American wearing gratitude the Lord has bestowed "LIFE, LIBERTY AND THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (sorry I went 2 lines over) 1.15.20 Whitman-Inspired Uplifting Poetry, old or new Poetry Contest Sponsor - Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 1/20/2020 2:52:00 PM
Great imagery ,Laura, and perfect write. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/20/2020 2:32:00 PM
Beautifully done, my 'daughter'! In my Air Force career, I had the privilege and the honor to visit all of the places you mentioned, and many more as well. America is the most beautiful place on God's green earth as far as I am concerned. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2020 1:13:00 PM
The eagle stands ready to unite our nation in times when disasters occur. It is like a phoenix rising above the ashes. I also like the way you took us from the Colorado mountains to Chicago, Arizona and Michigan. A fine ode, Lu. Congratulations on a second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2020 10:39:00 AM
Awesome ode, Lu Loo. Beautifully penned.
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