Numb

I feel numb To believe you liked me was dumb I can't complain I got what I deserved I feel so unnerved It's like a bad dream Someone wake me up Please I'm lost, Help me Who can I trust? I have to realize that life just sucks

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Kirin Lawrence

Date: 6/13/2013 2:04:00 AM

awwwww hugs* Things have a way of working out though, over time.

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/14/2013 12:52:00 PM

Aw, thank you so much for your kind words. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2013 2:16:00 PM

I hope it sucks less than when you wrote this and moves towards wow who knew life could be so good!

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/31/2013 11:56:00 AM

Oh it DEFINITELY does. When everything goes wrong you think it's the end of the world. But then you move on and things get better. :) Life can be oh so good for sure! ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2013 8:28:00 PM

Hi Caleah :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: once again your emotions are deep. and i agree with you on life, sucking,... enjoyed~ LINDA

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 1:52:00 PM

Haha! Thank you so much! (Yep, life certainly does suck now and then.) It's the getting back up that hurts the most though! I wish you a Happy Mother's Day too!

Donna Jones

Date: 2/3/2013 7:31:00 AM

Yeah it does... but sometimes it doesn't!

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 1:35:00 PM

True!