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November Blaze

And with the forged visage of thunder's sword Her sentry slays monsters of gray Freeing astral blooms to spark and blaze Across the brief November sky. 9/01/21 Liberum Divisa 7 Sponsor: Gregory Richard Barden Taken from 'Brief November'

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Anil Deo

Date: 12/2/2021 3:56:00 AM

Both this poem, and Three Trees ( I luv trees) burst with colors, vivacity, enough LIGHT to hold on. For Holidays or Spring. Thank u Michelle

Ann Peck

Date: 11/8/2021 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations, Michelle! Every strong line is a winner!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/2/2021 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I love this one and I love Nov. Have a blessed autumn day with your win...............

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/1/2021 8:02:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2021 11:45:00 AM

wow, I love this one . Congrats on your well deserved win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/1/2021 10:52:00 AM

Michelle, congratulations on your win. This imagery is amazing and stunning in its impact! Every line is a poem in itself. Beautiful job my friend! Blessings :D

Constance La France

Date: 11/1/2021 6:37:00 AM

Michelle, wonderful and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Ann Peck

Date: 10/31/2021 9:32:00 AM

Michele, that is just lovely! You have such a keen mind! I especially love "her sentry slays monsters of gray," but all four lines are great. Congratulations on your win!

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/31/2021 6:11:00 AM

Congratulations, Michelle! '...Across the brief November sky.' A wonderful piece! I love it! ...Fran

John Lusardi

Date: 10/31/2021 12:44:00 AM

Another great piece, and a deserved win. Great imagery, cleverly composed. Very good.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/30/2021 7:09:00 PM

A beautiful write, Michelle, and a well-earned third placement in a VERY competitive contest field - congratulations! Blessings, my friend! - the bard

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/16/2021 9:56:00 AM

A poetic blaze you spark in this November sky, as always your talented poetic choice of words in this poem certainly indicate a first win. Awesome write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/4/2021 10:37:00 AM

Michelle, You know there's something special in this poem's skies. 'Freeing astral blooms to spark and blaze' One of the best times to skydive for the views in Autumn. Your lines 'astral blooms to spark and blaze' -reminded me again. -Richard

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/3/2021 11:45:00 AM

Ah, if Blaze was only an horse . . . ..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/1/2021 5:04:00 PM

Still hoping against hope for some sunshine here like we had today: Just perfect! Mid 70's temps, low humidity, gentle breeze, a touch of Autumn heading into the evening. Ahhhhhh. November can wait... Oh, was I supposed to get off my ego-trip and comment on your poem?! lol. It's really terrific, except I'm trying to stay blue and billowy white! Smiles, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/1/2021 4:26:00 PM

Luscious language, I think you‘ll slay this one… but good luck just in case ~x