Notes

Notes from there. From the other side. Some say little things. Some say a lot. Others say nothing at all. I think to put a note Inside of a bottle. I'll send it to my lover. To the one I really love. To the one, I love inside. Notes from that space. Where you hold secrets inside. And things you try to hide. Make sure you catch it. As it comes floating by. Don't forget to catch it. Feel the love inside. For all the love you have inside. 8:30 pm Oct. 3, 2011

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/17/2015 1:38:00 AM

I find this to be a very 'explorative' piece Debbie, also very readable..' and enjoyable.!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2015 3:22:00 PM

Timely idea a message in a bottle..I wonder who will receive the note..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/25/2015 10:42:00 PM

Such tender, heartfelt words in this romantic write, Debbie. Very nicely penned!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2015 4:24:00 AM

- Dear Debbie, a lovely poem written by your heart :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/16/2015 8:28:00 PM

Some secret lover he must be and I hope he catches that love note inside. Nicely written. love phyl

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/12/2015 7:47:00 PM

Debby, I love the psychological aspects of your poetry. There is nicely arranged imagery in this. It's beautiful and to the point. I just have to smile and applaud.

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/12/2015 11:01:00 AM

Hope that's bottled up inside. Waiting for love to abide. And get released out from the moors. To sail away to far off shores. I love the title Debbie. These silent notes we do write.