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Mental illness is such a taboo subject because it is so misunderstood and untreatable.  People are medicated sometimes beyond stability and normality.  I have witnessed loved ones struggle for so long with this evil disease that it saddens me to watch them constantly battle.

Inside I scream but no one listens to mental ache attached to my brain. Darkness prevails as daylight glistens and my existence gradually wane. Thought is distorted from right to wrong unclear of direction up or down. Not really sure of where I belong so alone in my sorrows I drown. I can’t remember when I last ate or when I last took a warm shower. Sleepless days and nights I really hate feeling content is out of my power. When will someone know that I am here a person with a shadowing pain. Sometimes I wish I could disappear and not labeled as being insane… Copyright © 2015 By Caryl S. Muzzey 10/26/15 Second Place Winner ~ "Any Sad Poem" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings Nov. 25, 2015

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Date: 11/3/2015 5:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this sad poem!
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:00:00 PM
Carly, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 11/3/2015 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Skat... Carly
Date: 11/3/2015 6:20:00 AM
Very nice win, Caryl
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:46:00 AM
Really sad.. quite an emotive one.. Congrats on ur great win Caryl !
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Date: 10/30/2015 6:17:00 PM
oh yes, this is sad and beyond sad. This description feels like depression. Not insane. Many people suffer from this! Good luck in the contest, Caryl. And I bet you and I are about the same age. Are you a baby boomer too?
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 10/31/2015 1:09:00 PM
Baby boomer... Sometimes depression is labeled as insanity if left untreated long enough...
Date: 10/26/2015 5:37:00 PM
mental illness is so misunderstood I agree with you Caryl - very powerfully penned - good luck in the contest
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