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Night Lady

Stars magic mist that surrounds the night lady A lady of shape body with grace flowing into a field of dark Lit by the tiny whimsical dust that helps carry her form Solid is she the night lady that is covered in a veil of starlight Comforting sight to see her lonely walk away

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/24/2018 12:29:00 PM

HI Kristina it is a beautiful tribute to Stars of night,....i love your idea and way of writing

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2017 9:06:00 AM

Beautiful!

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 12/2/2017 7:25:00 PM

Thanks :-)

Carole Duet

Date: 11/30/2017 9:01:00 AM

Lovely imagery in this one too, Kristina.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/30/2017 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Carole! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2017 12:32:00 PM

Visually beautiful, Kristina! Night and the stars are indeed magical and captivating. Regards // paul

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/29/2017 1:51:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Paul! The evening time is inspirational for many senses. :-)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/28/2017 7:52:00 PM

I agree totally w/SO ... this is exceptional poetry, Kristina. Such a sensual, ethereal quality to this marvelous poem ... solid is she the night lady that is covered in a veil of starlight. Pure poetry this be. Love and peace always.

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/29/2017 11:35:00 AM

A more short poem than I typically write. I am so glad it has those lines that impact the image that inspired this from twitter @realisticpoetry It was a beautiful photo and I enjoyed the opportunity to participate in a group prompt. Thanks for your comment Freddie! Always love reading them!

Silent One

Date: 11/27/2017 8:39:00 AM

Now this is amazing imagery... Nice use of words.. Great vocabulary..

Kristina Whitmore
Date: 11/27/2017 12:56:00 PM

Thanks! I am glad you stop by to take the time to read some of my new writings. :-)