New Love

Under silver crescent moon He tastes lips of ruby red Her touch caresses his face Love is born anew

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Just Dylan

Date: 4/6/2019 9:13:00 PM

So sweet and so pure!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/7/2016 7:35:00 AM

Nothing abstract nor inconsistent with this write, Shane! Short and sweet but has unfathomable depth. Keep well, love from your pal, Mikki

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/7/2016 4:43:00 PM

Thank you Mikki, I really enjoy the structure of Japanese poetry, to try to express so much in such a minimalist way. I am not good at it but I try, maybe one day. Stay safe sweet lady, Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2015 4:49:00 AM

- A beautiful and delighted poem, dear Shane :) - I wish you a wonderful day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/5/2015 5:12:00 AM

My lovely friend, Again I thank you for stopping to read one of my poems. Your friendship is so thing I truly cherish. May your day be joyous And your heart find contentment Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/5/2015 12:03:00 AM

Romance is sweet....this poem a treat! :) Glad you are posting poems, Shane. Keep on keeping on, dear.

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/5/2015 5:06:00 AM

Hello little Bambi, Love is always reborn and is always as beautiful as the first tender kiss, it never dies only lies quietly sleeping waiting for the spring thaw. Stay safe my friend Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2015 4:09:00 AM

ohhh how romantic Shane - truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 8/4/2015 4:59:00 AM

Hi Jan, I am happy that you like this Dodoitsu. The image of a crescent moon has been in my mind of late just waiting to find its setting. Love Shane xxx