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New Beginning

One room apartment and days alone to ponder just what apart meant

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Joesephine Remarnier

Date: 9/10/2010 5:24:00 AM

Brilliant, just love the way you play with language. Also, I'm thinking because of a Haikus' length limitations the feeling of sadness is elevated. I normally don't care for Haikus but this may be one of the best I've read.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2010 5:41:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2010 1:59:00 PM

That sounds like being trapped and lonely or free as a bird to do what one wants to do when they want to do it....I like the last half of that previous line to do what one wants to do..Sara

David Smalling

Date: 9/6/2010 11:06:00 AM

Something to tear the heart and rent the emotions ... a poem from a wonderful mind

Constance La France

Date: 9/5/2010 6:35:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry. I can sure relate to your words in this poem, I spend hours in comptemplation, and then I write of it in poetry.. love Constance

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/4/2010 9:27:00 PM

Beautiful words telling the gravity of loneliness but for a poet, loneliness can also be a boon, if you can make it. Try. Many thanks for your sweet comments on my Poem Patradoot35. Love and best wishes....Ravindra........Wayne Sapp.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2010 8:34:00 PM

Nice haiku with good and apt images, Wayne

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/4/2010 7:32:00 PM

uhoh...did some one make a blunder??

Date: 9/4/2010 1:25:00 PM

It sure makes you think. Enjoyed reading. Love Scarlett