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Nature's Own

She walks barefoot in total harmony... on her mossy forest path. The tall trees bow their limbs before her. Her eye's twinkle a hello to each while passing by. Her long, dark hair braided with ivy... drapes down over her shoulders, as the full moon gently caresses her bare skin... causing a soft glow to form around her. It is midnight, as she enters a meadow. Joining her is her brother the wolf and her sister the owl. Now with just a wave of her hand, the wolf howls into the night...which echos among the trees. Sets of yellow eyes can now be seen all along the edge of the meadow. Without fear or doubt she calls to her ancestors for enlightenment. Their answers come in the whispering of the trees. She gives thanks by placing sage and other herbs into the earth. She is one with the elements...a natural born witch. P.R.Deremer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/21/2015 9:05:00 AM
Really enjoyed this Pam
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Date: 10/15/2015 4:32:00 PM
Wonderful, Pam! Wonderful expression and imagery! a 7 at least.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/16/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/6/2015 5:26:00 PM
Dear Pam So the same question is posed at you now, feel free to answer as you wish, my new friend, cheri
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/7/2015 12:42:00 PM
Up until a few years back I hadn't written at all. Then due to an accident at work and my Parkinsons. I retired as a nurse of 20 years. It was a tough pill to swallow. You've heard of the saying that sometimes when you lose one ability, another takes it's place. That's what happened. I have 2 books published and are on Amazon but they aren't poetry books.
Date: 10/6/2015 5:25:00 PM
Dear Pam You asked if it comes naturally, the only way I can answer that is by saying I've been writing scense I was in the third grade, at first it was just a hobby but later it became more, now it's something I really love doing, and my greatest wish is to be someday published and earning a nice living at it, you know how they say only the fortunate few can have a job that they enjoy, while others take what they can get, well I want to be one of the fortunate few, lol cheri
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Date: 10/6/2015 4:51:00 PM
Dear Pam Glad you enjoy my Halloween poetry, I love to write these even if it takes a few days of my summer away, I just put them aside until October, again thank you, cheri
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Date: 10/5/2015 9:10:00 PM
Thank you for your cool and awesome comment I enjoy doing these haunted poems, expecially the classics, I'll give you a heads up my new friend tomorrow Will be my Vampires, a two day themed special but don't spread it around, lol take care and have a spooky nights sleep, just kidding, cheri
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/5/2015 9:16:00 PM
oh neat ! I will keep it hush hush. My cats will keep it under their fur too. lol
Date: 10/4/2015 8:04:00 PM
PRD, Was it witch hazel to rub on nature's soft skin or hazel eyes trying to make up which color they are? Aren't there both good and bad witches? Jim Horn
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/4/2015 8:21:00 PM
Yes there are good and bad in everything, positive and negative. The universe is made up of both.
Date: 10/3/2015 6:00:00 PM
Pam, thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Just read some of your own and I have to say I'm impressed with the images you paint.
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:12:00 PM
Dear Pam Love this my sister elemental, awesome the ending is subperb, wow girl this is excellence in poetry, love it to the point of a seven my dear friend, cheri and also thanks for the review of my poem also glad you enjoyed it so much take care and have a wonderful weekend.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/2/2015 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment and you have a wonderful weekend too!
Date: 10/2/2015 3:42:00 PM
Love this, it's beautifully written and kept me captivated xxx
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/2/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/2/2015 2:18:00 PM
Very captivating write, Pam. I didn't expect that ending. I kept reading to find out who this person was. Intriguing. Thanks for your visit to my work.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/2/2015 3:13:00 PM
Your welcome and thank you for reading my work.

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