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Nature In Our Garden

"The Envelope" Opening my door to descent the steps to visit my garden makes my dreams come true, it enlightens my heart most of the time . Whispering to my roses, watching the very old trees, watering the green grass, I love it. Suddenly my heart starts beating just found an envelope with white roses sleeping at my doorsteps. Anxious to discover the sender with a huge smile my surprise was from my darling, He wrote: You are the woman of my dreams, I am taking the liberty to announce you are my reason to live. If you are not in my life I will not tolerate my existence one moment longer. I need to carry you towards our love nest share our hot body, love the love that will slowly put off that burning fire between us Under our green trees tomorrow. Lay your roses down free your hand to hold mine, Together: We will walk towards our garden and dream of that day when our eyes will meet to become bride and bridegroom Surrounded by the trees everywhere. Friends clapping so hard for us to engage with that beautiful touch of our lips, A sign you belong to me forever. I Love Him: Will you marry me my woman? Oh! Yes I screamed not realizing he is not here. . My heart was instantly beating towards positive thoughts My husband to love to sleep with, to cook, to wash, to wake up in the morning have our cup of coffee in the fresh air. I will stand by my man, no matter what. A beautiful marriage in my garden, I will place 100 white chairs on each side on the grass, With green ribbons. The grass will emerge To beautify their existence for our guests. We will be married as soon as he walks through my door Tomorrow. Our unique marriage in our Green Garden Of Eden, was to be televised that day As a huge surprise for our guests A wedding gift. Instead, his death was televised, Soldier shot down. She walked back home alone Still wearing her wedding gown. True story. Therese Bacha Contest for PD. Nature.. Win N0. 8

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Date: 11/28/2018 8:58:00 AM
You are a brave woman.
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Date: 11/28/2018 4:16:00 AM
wow illustrative presentation and poetic expression /// lovely poem
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:01:00 PM
Big heartfelt congratulations with your awesome win and great write/story my dear friend Therese! So love & enjoyed your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing! Warm big hugs, Leonora
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Therese Bacha
Date: 5/24/2013 10:42:00 AM
Well well. thank you Leonora for passing by, it makes me so happy. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 5/23/2013 1:30:00 AM
wow lovely story, even better because it is true......Seren
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Date: 5/23/2013 6:44:00 AM
Hi Seren, thank you for passing by,It nice of you. Terry.
Date: 5/22/2013 5:29:00 PM
Beautifully presented.... I was there, Under the huge green tree. You were beautiful and he was the envy of every man there.... Great writing... win deserved.... Love, always.... Jake
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Therese Bacha
Date: 5/22/2013 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Jake, so nice your compliments. Have a great evening. Terry.
Date: 5/22/2013 1:05:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats on your win, S.
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Date: 5/22/2013 3:50:00 PM
Nice of you to pass by, thank you so much. Terry
Date: 5/22/2013 9:12:00 AM
a very beautiful garden and story Terry, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
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Therese Bacha
Date: 5/22/2013 9:50:00 AM
PD, I am always so touched when you accept me in your contests, you are such a faithful friend. And accepting me gives me the strength to go on, being appreciated by you , is an honor. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 5/22/2013 8:48:00 AM
What a wonderful story this is !!! Lovely of you to share this love with us! Beautiful !!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 5/22/2013 3:51:00 PM
Hi Carrie, nice to see your smile again, thank you so much. Terry
Date: 4/18/2013 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.This is so beautiful - like a fairy tale. Something that you could make a movie out of. Thanks for sharing..... lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 5/22/2013 3:52:00 PM
Hi Lucy, i never replied on this comment, so sorry, i just saw it. I hope you are enjoying your trip. Love Terry
Date: 3/23/2013 8:53:00 AM
My humble congrats... I indeed enjoyed reading this pen esp. The 'Green...' thoughts. cheers ~ A. O
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Date: 3/23/2013 9:02:00 AM
So nice of you to pass by, thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/23/2013 6:21:00 AM
My big hearty congratulations on your top win and superb write my dear friend Therese. An amazing piece indeed and I've extremely enjoyed reading it this evening! Thank you so much for sharing your gems. Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/23/2013 9:01:00 AM
Hi Leonora, loved reading your comments, so warm, thank you so much. You to have a great weekend. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/22/2013 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/22/2013 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Sara, and you to congratulation on your win, Have a beautiful weekend. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/21/2013 9:25:00 PM
Dear Terry, stopping by to thank you for always considering my contest... Congratulations with your top winning poem... always~ Linda
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/21/2013 9:39:00 PM
My Lady PD, as usual i really need to thank you so much, i am honored to be accepted in your contests.....I hope i can keep up with your unbelievable surprises . Thank you again. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 2/22/2013 1:22:00 AM
the longed for, not always seen, love and sweet romance, between, two people with no parting, loving tween, when the true love gets to dance, the sound of sweet romance, surges through! and 2 lovers get their due, ration of the passion branch, its true.... Don re:Two Lovers ... Therese Bacha
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Date: 2/22/2013 8:59:00 AM
Here comes the handsome guy....Don, ,, thanks you for the beautiful poem.....so nice of you....have a wonderful weekend wherever yo are.....Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/7/2013 10:16:00 AM
Romantic! Just like I like it! :) Therese, how can I thank you for your love and support? Words fail me! I wish I could send you a flower...like one of the ones you wrote so beautifully about. A flower of gratitude for your generous heart and spirit! :) Hugs from my hideaway! Don't worry dear...I'm on the mend!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/7/2013 10:35:00 AM
Hi Eileen bon voyage and enjoy your stay....i am so happy to know you will be great........take care hope to hear your will be back soon.....Terry xoxoox
Date: 2/7/2013 8:37:00 AM
Wow Terry, this is amazing poetry, such love and sincerity, and what a joy to read....
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/7/2013 10:36:00 AM
Thank you Harry......its nice of you Terry xoxo
Date: 2/7/2013 6:24:00 AM
Oh ...... I like this poem very much Terry. - It's gorgeous. - - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/7/2013 6:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne......you always have nice comments......have a beautiful day......Terry oxox
Date: 2/5/2013 1:46:00 PM
This is a brilliantly written write my friend! I enjoyed reading this awesome poem this afternoon! what a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/5/2013 2:23:00 PM
Thank you my faithful friend.......Terry xoxo
Date: 2/5/2013 8:34:00 AM
What beautiful dreamy words.Worfs each romantic yearn for..Beautifully penned dear
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/5/2013 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine it is so nice of you to always pass by......i love your comments....Love Terry xoxo

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