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Natural Walk

Walk softly the pass Your feet meet our mother earth Breathing from the grass Take in the affection Of your own natural walk Reaching perfection

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Daver Austin

Date: 11/22/2016 9:30:00 AM

These are really fine, Cynthia. And fine Haiku are not easy to write. Congrats, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 7:45:00 PM

enjoyed this haiku Cynthia @-> LINDA <-@

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/20/2014 7:31:00 AM

Peaceful easy feeling, enjoyable and soft, well done :)

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 8:07:00 AM

thanks , I like to pretend I am a monk high on a mountain, all alone, forever, no one to talk to, so when someone finds me someday they will know what I had to say :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/20/2014 7:07:00 AM

Here Cynthia again with full vigor. Hugs!

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 8:03:00 AM

thank you I learned haiku here from a very talented poet who gave me a phrase that says so much and is complicated by taking 4 syllables I found it a good test, I hope it is ok to grow haikus out, :) if not then oh well the life of a black sheep :)