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Mysterious Trees

Alone amongst a forest of foreboding trees I hear restless rustling of whispering leaves they rise and fall, are held captive among the windy utterances of an ancient tongue. Wild words can be heard, like woodwinds, disturbed cloaked and rooted in time, their meanings preserved I listen as I roam, through stoic, staunch groves as I try to discern the deep secrets they know. Do I hear woodsy lyrics of timeless songs? I move to mysterious tunes and sway along as mist rolls into the forest and blankets the earth I feel the heartbeat of trees and their endless worth. Written on 5/16/2022

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Date: 6/12/2022 2:24:00 AM
Laura, I also feel the heartbeat and worth of trees, they are a fascination to me, the shapes, colours, blossoms and fruits, each one a beautiful divine creation… Belle
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/12/2022 5:51:00 AM
Yes, trees are truly part of the beauty of this earth. Thank you for your kind comments! :)
Date: 6/2/2022 1:44:00 AM
I love how the trees tell their story within their rings without speaking, yet indeed we hear their message. I do think I sometimes hear them sing. Congratulations on your lovely poem placing Second Laura. Blessings xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/2/2022 9:37:00 PM
Thanks, Connie! I’m so happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 5/19/2022 4:22:00 PM
very spiritual poem showing how everything in nature is connected, if we would only listen
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/19/2022 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic. I’m so glad you stopped by with your kind comments..happy you liked this one! :)
Date: 5/18/2022 5:17:00 PM
There is a real allure and mystique in an old forest... if these trees could speak, what stories they would tell. Your musical ear hears woodwinds, drumbeats, and lyrics on the wind. Enchanting writing, Laura ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/18/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful comments, John. So happy you liked this! :)
Date: 5/17/2022 8:17:00 PM
You vividly paint sights and sounds. Enjoyed reading this gem!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2022 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Valerie! So glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 5/17/2022 11:49:00 AM
Love this! When the wind whistles through the pines, it does sound like an angelic choir, and one does try to "understand" what words are being sung! Enjoyed, Laura! Aloha!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2022 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Rico! So glad you enjoyed this! :)
Date: 5/17/2022 9:40:00 AM
I think your right…nature speaks of the past, present and future. And o how I love trees!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/17/2022 11:19:00 AM
I love trees, too, Kim! Thanks for stopping by and commenting! :)
Date: 5/16/2022 8:59:00 PM
The secrets of the trees are so alluring, this is so enchanting!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/16/2022 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! So glad you liked this! :)

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