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My Song To You

Come to the meadow just you only, Where autumn weaves her spell; On hills and purple moorlands lonely, Where the magic of her presence dwells. Beneath blue sky and fields of heather, With soft humming of honey bees. And I'll hold you, just us two together, To share the scent of autumns leaves. We’ve time to share asters in the meadow, With all that we love best; With the swallows wings and your shadow, And summer's grass that built the nest. To hold and hear the soft wind singing, To see your hair tossed and blown; And meet the bluebird softly winging, Through heaven and earth, we too fly alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/15/2013 5:07:00 PM
Lizzy, you had a poem entitled DArkness that I had really loved in case you were thinking of entering my Fave contest. Just to let you know, sweetie!!
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:52:00 PM
I never tire of your poems rejoicing in the beauty of birds and flowers, and the glory of love. Wonderful abab rhyming and flow. Superb, Elizabeth!
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:18:00 PM
what do autumn leaves smell like? :)
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Date: 7/20/2011 10:00:00 AM
Another gret one my friend. It's no wonder yu are one of my fave poets. Great stuff here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:02:00 PM
In your Rhyme, its clear about your song is worded so beautifully that touched me, I enjoyed. nice,bl
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Date: 7/17/2011 12:44:00 PM
Such a beautiful lonely sense of love. Where two as one fly up above. The fray of desperate hallowed souls. Where the flame of passion burns from the coals. I am left in soft sweet clover. This day I wish to never be over. The essence of your natural verse. Removes the emptiness of my curse. I'm gliding now on peaceful wings. I swear I hear that soft wind sing. My heart is full of heavens grace. Your gentle words have touched my face.
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Date: 7/17/2011 1:31:00 AM
I can clearly see and hear all that you describe, so vividly. A very lyrical write. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:45:00 PM
A poetic masterpiece well weaved together in verse. Beautiful expressions and under-tones of wonderful imagery filled with amazing mystic lines, my fave..."Weve time to share asters in the meadow"...truly a fantastic write Elizabeth!
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:10:00 PM
You write so beautifully, Liz, I can feel every image you have perfectly crafted, keep on writing I love it, Rich
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Date: 7/16/2011 4:22:00 PM
Isn't meadow such a lovely word. It oozes summer, colour, the flutter of wings. I love this piece Elizabeth, and like Judy, it's going to my favourites :)
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Date: 7/15/2011 11:58:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Tis A Very Lovely Thought Brushed In Pretty My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth = To Love & Be Loved, To Long To Hold, To Share Eternity With One You Love == Love The Serenity & Emotions Felt Amid This Pleasant & Wonderful Painting In Poe *^_^* Beautiful Elizabeth.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:07:00 AM
This is absolutely lovely. Going into my faves. Love the description here. Beautiful imagery and great rhyme and rhythm.
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:49:00 PM
Sweet write....enjoyed!
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:14:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:09:00 AM
A wonderful write Elizabeth, I enjoyed reading today. Keep your creative pen flowing~ Caryl
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:28:00 AM
lovely work...TAH
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:04:00 AM
A beautiful piece Elizabeth. You've painted such a vivid picture, love the end line. Best wishes Em :)
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