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My Raspberry

Soft edible fruits, My love, Time to get you fit, Juice your fruits, My darling Be healthy Squeeze, That’s the trick Succulently tender, Press firmly, Ready! In a shake, Fill your glass, Rich in red flavor, Kissing your Palate plate, Tenderly Extracting, Picking From the bush, Raspberries Seriously Extremely, Deliciously, Good. 19/02/2017 Wendy Jae

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Date: 2/21/2017 12:50:00 PM
Very good well written Pete. Very fruity.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/21/2017 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Peter
Date: 2/19/2017 10:31:00 PM
Yummm! Berries are always so much sweeter when you eat them right off the bush. Great job. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/21/2017 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Judy
Date: 2/19/2017 7:32:00 PM
Tasty Wendy...
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Charles amended mistake x
Date: 2/19/2017 5:50:00 PM
Yummm with three m's:) Sounds delicious, Mrs Wendy:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 8:13:00 PM
Eat straight from the tree if you want x
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/19/2017 7:26:00 PM
How about whipping me up a raspberry smoothie:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 6:48:00 PM
Hi Daniel I've updated it better now check it out and thank you for reading x
Date: 2/19/2017 3:38:00 PM
My favourite fruit Wendy I loved your fruit poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 3:52:00 PM
Yes x I'm enjoying the flowers and fruits theme x some more to come I think x trying to keep the clean lol
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Jan xxx
Date: 2/19/2017 2:52:00 PM
- Juicy, fresh and healthy ... lovely written, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 3:03:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine x wish I could have more healthy fruits x
Date: 2/19/2017 2:47:00 PM
I'll take a glass please...delightful Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 3:05:00 PM
Come over yours is waiting I have saved a glass x

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