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My Poem Now a Song Why You Are Standing

Poem cum Song "Standing So Far Away" -Part 1 Now a Song 'Why You Are Standing So Far Away From Me' From my Broken Heart Song Series You can hear this Song on my You Tube Music channel RavindraKK1 or by using the URL given below: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMVDRp91tVA Why, you are standing So far, away from me As if, we do not, Know each other From too far away You are, looking at me Just like a stranger. Do you, have any remembrance Of me, and my love, Do you remember, those days When we were, in love, When going, away, from me Was a shocking thing For you But, today, you are, standing So far away from me. Do you still remember Sitting, for hours with me In the shade of a tree While, telling to me All the love stories And telling to me That your love for me Will be there Till the eternity. Why, you are standing So far, away from me As if, we do not, Know each other From too far away You are, looking at me Just like a stranger. Ravindra Kanpur India 14th Dec. 2014 NOTE: IF YOU LIFE THE SONG?- PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS ON MY SONG ALSO. LWB

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Date: 4/12/2015 11:28:00 PM
it is quite an amazing yet devastating thing when you are lovers one day than a month later one could act as if you never happened, enjoyed your write. -love,p.d.
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Date: 12/14/2014 11:29:00 AM
Ravindra, I do not have time to go listen to it, but I can imagine your voice and how you would sing it. It is a very good one for the style you use when you sing. Love it!
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 12/14/2014 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for going through the Poem and your sweet comments. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
Date: 12/14/2014 7:41:00 AM
- I have listened and read your beautiful poem,Ravindra - I do not have F.B. I can not leave you a comments on your youtube music channel - (is it you yourself singing and playing ?) - Proficient !!! - I wish you and your family Merry Christmas - Really nice that you visited my poem today :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 12/14/2014 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Anne for your kind comments. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra
Date: 12/14/2014 2:37:00 AM
These lines were initially written as a Poem then converted into a Song. I have no idea how far it is good or bad and I shall be waiting for the valuable comments from my Poetry Soup friends. Please do not mind as I am not very regular on my friends pages. With best wishes for a Merry Christmas and the New Year 2015. Ravindra K Kapoor
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