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My Love (Alouette) Loving all these years Through my joy and tears… My sweet memories don't fade. When I dream of you Feelings do renew And my joy seems Heaven made. It feels so very real As my heart does heal From the aftermath of death. Intense longing pain I try to regain Peace, with every calming breath. I feel you are near Your presence is here At night, when I try to sleep. You are in my head When I go to bed, I won't let you see me weep. Now, forever more The man I adore Will keep quiet company. Serene thoughts of you In all that I do Brings me comfort wondrously. 8-6-22 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest~N/A~ Sponsored by: Brian Strand As I Dream Poetry Contest~N/A~ Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose I used: https://www.howmanysyllables.com/ *The Alouette Form: The Alouette, created by Jan Turner, consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, with the following set rules: Meter: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7 Rhyme Scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b The form name is a French word meaning 'skylark' or larks that fly high, the association to the lark's song being appropriate for the musical quality of this form. The word 'alouette' can also mean a children's song (usually sung in a group), and although this poetry form is not necessarily for children's poetry (but can be applied that way), it is reminiscent of that style of short lines. Preference for the meter accent is on the third syllable of each line.

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Date: 10/3/2022 7:10:00 AM
Dearest Connie, now you are in the arms of your loved ones, no more tears, no more sorrow ~ just the serenity and kindness that you bestowed on those whose lives you touched. God Bless you and Keep you, may his light shine upon you! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 9/17/2022 12:39:00 PM
Connie I had read this before..And was sure I Had commented.' I think now I was interrupted And getting back slipped my mind, then as now The great love for your husband and family Members glows on the page; pages screen, wherever It reflects in the words of us who, had Exchanges with you.' Your quality's were an Asset also they have impacted so many here Your remarkable forbearance and sound advice Will remain with us, bless the Lord who blesses Thank you for everything Connie.'
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Date: 9/17/2022 12:38:00 PM
Connie I had read this before..And was sure I Had commented.' I think now I was interrupted And getting back slipped my mind, then as now The great love for your husband and family Members glows on the page; pages screen, wherever It reflects in the words of us who, had Exchanges with you.' Your quality's were an Asset also they have impacted so many here Your remarkable forbearance and sound advice Will remain with us, bless the Lord who blesses Thank you for everything Connie.'
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Date: 9/15/2022 1:00:00 PM
Rest in peace with your son and husband in the arms of the Heavenly father.
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Date: 9/15/2022 4:09:00 AM
Dearest Connie I know your husband and son were waiting patiently with open arms. I can't imagine the love you felt in seeing them. The hurt that you felt when both left was brought back to you in your heavenly meeting place. My last thought of you will be seeing you with Jesus, and your husband and son. Thank you for all the joy you brought me. How you made me feel in your comments and the kindness and love I felt from you. Enjoy Heaven, the company of your Beloved husband and son, and our Lord
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Date: 9/14/2022 5:57:00 PM
Dear Connie, I will miss you and your amazing poetry. The love that you expressed for family, poetry, and your soup friends will not be forgotten. I will miss you very much, my friend-Alexis
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Date: 9/14/2022 2:09:00 PM
Dear Connie, Although I am heartbroken, I find peace in knowing you are with your love (Alouette) for eternity. I will miss you my dear friend and will forever treasure the friendship we shared.
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Date: 9/14/2022 12:25:00 PM
Connie, your words have so much pain as I read them, rest in peace dear poet, now you are in the arms of your loving husband again, and all your pain is gone. I will miss you forever, blessings ~
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Date: 9/14/2022 11:20:00 AM
Dearest Connie, rest in peace. You loved speaking different languages, Mandarin your beloved husband's, you even wrote a poem in French, I'll always remember that. Your last reply to my poem "How the master poets still inspire us Anaya. I will miss your comments and presence here on Poetry Soup. ~With love, Anaya
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Date: 9/14/2022 9:45:00 AM
You will be always missed by me and other poets of Soup dear sweet Connie...You were so graceful and kind towards all of us here...and were such a great inspiration for all of us...Now, there Above, you are united with your beloved.. Rest in Peace... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/14/2022 6:40:00 AM
Connie, a beautiful poem. The love of your life will always be around, silently invisibly and joyfully. Memories are engraved in our minds and hearts. I think you are a very brave lady losing your two loves close together in the same year. But I am certain you can see the love of your life in your grandchildren who must be an absolute treasure for you. I am going to be a granny soon. After 17 years together, finally they decided they want a baby, I cant wait. blessings my friend Jenn.
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Date: 9/14/2022 6:12:00 AM
Rest in peace, ensconced in God’s domain of effulgent light and unconditional love, dear Connie. Your tender touch and poetic brilliance will always be remembered by all on PS
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Date: 9/14/2022 4:11:00 AM
Rest in peace, my sweet friend Connie. You were always such a lovely, gracious soul, encouraging us poets. Gone but never forgotten, you will be sadly missed, Connie.xxx
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Date: 9/14/2022 2:47:00 AM
Connie.... when I wrote a comment for this poem of your's, I never thought that your meeting with your beloved will be so soon. Get united at the pearly gates of Heaven and celebrate your union.... ! Will miss you !
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Date: 9/14/2022 2:53:00 AM
Sorry to think that you are not there to come up with a response to our comments as earlier..............
Date: 9/13/2022 10:21:00 PM
Dearest Connie, sweet poetry sister and friend - the Lord bless you and keep you, the Lord make his face shine upon you and be gracious to you, the Lord turn his countenance to you and give you peace. RIP, dear friend. Love always ~ John
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Date: 9/13/2022 9:34:00 PM
Dearest Connie - may you rest in peace dear friend. I will miss you so much and thank you for your kindly comments - always appreciated. Now in the arms of your dearest husband God bless you both... with love Ann xx
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Date: 9/13/2022 9:08:00 PM
Rest in peace, dear Connie. You have always been so special, reading and commenting on my poetry even though I could not always do the same. I know how much your dear husband meant to you and how much you missed him. You are both finally together forever. You surely will be sadly missed, dear friend. Sandra
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Date: 9/13/2022 6:05:00 PM
Together again, Dear Connie. Your poetry lives on. I will miss you....Thanks for the joy you gave us all..Harry
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Date: 9/13/2022 2:33:00 PM
My dear Connie, may you have the peace you experienced, and shared with all who knew you, in this new adventure in your eternal life. I will always miss you!
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Date: 9/13/2022 1:58:00 PM
Rest In peace Connie. You will be very much missed here but remembered through your wonderful poetry. X Gary
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Date: 9/13/2022 1:02:00 PM
I am really going to miss you, my beloved friend. You did so much for me in the past 20 years that I knew you. Rest in peace. You are now with your love.
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Date: 9/4/2022 12:15:00 AM
You have tackled this form effortlessly, Connie. Irrespective of contest results, I consider this poem as one that easily wins me over with its heartfelt sincerity and emotional drive. May dear memories bring you comfort in life, my friend. ~ Blessings // paul
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Date: 8/30/2022 2:58:00 PM
Memories of a lost love are always bittersweet, reminiscing the joy and good times, while acknowledging the empty places in our heart and home. This is so beautifully composed and a Fave for me. You knew Jan Turner at your old poetry site, yes? This is a lovely form and you have done it justice with this jewel. Hugs ~ John
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/31/2022 1:31:00 AM
I agree with you John. I don’t think I could ever give up Poetry completely, it is in my blood. I have poetry books from all the great masters and some from obscure poets as well. Lord Byron is one of my favorites. Jan was an artist as well and I have four of her paintings two hanging on my wall. I hope she is well.
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John Watt
Date: 8/30/2022 5:23:00 PM
Connie, as I recall Jan was also a talented artist and would accompany her poems with drawing. It's interesting how some people just quit writing poetry and move on to something else. I've heard that about several people. It's what makes me admire all the more the ones who stay committed over years and years.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/30/2022 4:08:00 PM
Thank you very much John. Yes, Jan was a talented poet and we were good friends. Her computer got a virus and she quit communicating with me and the club. She also had some health issues and probably could not keep up with poetry. Jan created several poetry forms. This one is a favorite of mine. I appreciate you Faving this poem very much John. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo
Date: 8/27/2022 4:55:00 PM
Oh Connie such a beautiful poem of love, loss and the comfort our memories bring. Beautiful! Debx
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Date: 8/26/2022 11:50:00 PM
Your memories are treasures Connie, heartfelt and beautiful.
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