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My Light Will Find You

In a crowd of millions , my eyes will find you. Before the darkness descends my light will find you. Before passion overpowers perseverence, Before ecstacy inhales effervescence, My soul would merge with you. Before tender words succumbs to death Before emotion engulfs your breath I will make love to you In all the ways Love Red

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/26/2017 12:36:00 PM

awesome poem -JT

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 8:35:00 AM

Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/29/2016 11:32:00 AM

quite a radiant light shines in your words excellent pen red wishing you a blessing of a day pal

James Inman

Date: 5/1/2016 10:04:00 AM

You are a very intense writer RF. All of your poems seem to have a personal and introspective feel that draws the reader in keeping them wanting more. You touch on my own fantasies in a personal way, for I, perhaps like you, live in my own fantasy world. You are a melancholic but passionate writer. I enjoy reading your work.

Anand Parmale

Date: 3/24/2016 12:29:00 PM

Awesome write RF

Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/21/2016 6:42:00 AM

Red, this is hauntingly lovely. I relish every line. Your bright poetic eyes have certainly found me. I love it. Thanks for your generosity in sharing it. Wonderful!

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/14/2016 5:11:00 AM

Unstoppable desire, love it. A fine piece, Red. Viv x

Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:16:00 AM

thank you Viv...:)

Funom Makama

Date: 3/13/2016 11:12:00 AM

Epic, wonderful and outstanding. What a great share!

Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:16:00 AM

Thank u :)

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:22:00 AM

You shouldn't need to try to find him, He should be chasing you after words like that!

Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:17:00 AM

* blushing*

Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/7/2016 7:22:00 AM

Red, this is a lovely, emotionally powerful composition. I relished every line, and I think the title and concept are of surpassing excellence. Standing ovation!

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:36:00 AM

Thank you paul... I like to write about love, passion abd sometimes death and sorrow...glad that you liked this... Hugs Red

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 9:21:00 PM

Amazing feeling RED :) To find the one you love in a crowd, where nothing will get in your hearts desire way. A deep and FIERY end... Love LINDA

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:36:00 AM

You're a sweetheart :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/3/2016 3:16:00 PM

Some gray comments!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2016 8:02:00 PM

I meant some great comments. Darn that spell correct *lol*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2016 1:07:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:17:00 AM

thank u Anne..:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/2/2016 3:56:00 AM

Wow, you are back, Red this is amazing..don't get around much on soup anymore, but this poetry of yours sure is the lure. hope this time you stays. Soup is missing so many poets of your Calibre.

Red Fiery
Date: 3/3/2016 7:52:00 PM

Thank you harry...you have been kind to me ...:) Sometimes I get disappointed by negative comments but when I read comments from friends like you, I really feel uplifted...!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/1/2016 11:08:00 PM

You do passion so well! Bravo!

Red Fiery
Date: 3/3/2016 7:54:00 PM

Thank you Richard ! You have been very supportive and I promise that I will continue to write...:)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/1/2016 2:52:00 PM

Very passionate and romantic...love the line "Before ecstasy inhales effervescence, My soul would merge with you."

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Tim...! I have read your poems... You're immensely talented

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2016 2:50:00 PM

Captivated by your light that shines throughout the whole poem; you use words to tempt and 'seduce' without ever crossing boundaries. Well done! ~ Regards // paul

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:38:00 AM

I am flabbergasted to read your comments... Hugs red