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My Home Anacreontic Verse

You were my home My refuge, My place of peace, My protection, My Hawaiian Melody Where love always Welcomed me With a warm hug, A knowing gaze, A celestial Connection Where our words Were not needed. A place where Understanding And acceptance Dwelled within A huge beating Humble heart That was in Rhythm with mine. So Divine! Then sadly you died. Now I am homeless. 4-14-21 Anacreontic Verse Poetry Contest Sponsor Silent One

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Valsa George

Date: 1/4/2022 7:38:00 PM

Sorry to listen to this sad story ! This poem is so beautifully written.... Connie and tugs at my heart strings. A shelter can be a roof above our head or a person who is a source of comfort in life through and through. When we lose it, the pain is unspeakable .

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 10:20:00 AM

WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a sad story/write. Losing a love one is a trip through hell. I love how you started with "My refuge" and ended with "I am homeless." I am so sorry. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Silent One

Date: 7/29/2021 6:50:00 AM

Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/6/2021 2:48:00 AM

Thank you for your first placement Silent. This has been a very turbulent year for me. Two months ago my son died and now my last son is in the hospital after going through surgery for an aneurysm. He cannot move his left side but I am very hopeful one day he may regain the ability to walk. My dear husband has been gone for one year now. I have tried but I just cannot write poetry at this time. Bless you xxoo

John Fleming

Date: 5/1/2021 8:42:00 AM

May the great seeing, omnipotent eye watch over you always, Connie...and ensure you are safe and content when held in the gaze of his all encompassing vigilance. Aloha! Your friend. :) john

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/14/2021 11:52:00 PM

I was very moved by your sincere comment John. Thank you for your sympathy which is very much appreciated. I am still in awe of the wonderful poem you wrote to honor my husband and me. Thank you again. Blessings Always, Connie

Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 6:13:00 PM

Oh my dear.. I am deeply touched and so so sorry for your loss. It is not a pleasant experience losing a love one and I hope you get all the comfort that you need. Above all, stay strong, life will still smile at you in different ways. So sorry Connie

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2021 11:07:00 AM

Oh Connie, I shed some tears whilst reading this gem my friend. The pain must be hard to bear when a loving partner passes on, I am so sorry, but your wonderful children and grandchildren will always be there for you. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/24/2021 6:22:00 PM

Thank you very much Jennifer. I am doing better now and adjusting to life without him. I am very blessed to have my daughter and granddaughter living with me. My granddaughter is an angel and really helps me a lot. We are homeschooling her. Hugs Connie

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/19/2021 6:42:00 PM

Hello Connie ... very moving indeed. A lovely tribute that displays that love never dies - thank you Connie - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/20/2021 10:05:00 AM

I miss him every day. Thank you Lindsay. Blessings xxoo

Gary Radice

Date: 4/19/2021 1:58:00 AM

A poignant poem Connie that truly celebrates love. It's not just a lovely poetic tribute to your late husband but a lovely poetic tribute to you both - Gary

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/19/2021 11:41:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely insightful comment Gary. It is much appreciated. Blessings

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/18/2021 9:00:00 AM

Beautiful, Connie ~ so moving

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank you very much Line. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/18/2021 7:46:00 AM

Connie, a beautiful yet sad piece that deeply touches ones heart. Take Care, Paulette

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank you very much Paulette. I appreciate your lovely comment. Blessings xxoo

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/18/2021 6:38:00 AM

So very sad! But this is such a splendid write! Best wishes in the contest Connie..

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank you very much JCB. I was really missing my husband on Easter when I wrote this. He was my inspiration for most of my poetry. Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/17/2021 7:40:00 AM

Connie you will always be a talented poetess and you will always have your guardian angel watching over you, never far from you. Beautiful Connie, Blessings and hugs, hope this rates as a top win. Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. I can feel the presence of my angels. They constantly answer my pleas for help. Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/17/2021 7:03:00 AM

This is so beautifully written Connie! Bless you, my friend :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:04:00 AM

Thank you sweet Heidi. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2021 8:13:00 AM

Beautiful memories, Connie, but how sad it is to lose someone so very close to you, the one you shared a life with! Take care...blessings, my friend. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:03:00 AM

It is a process Paul. I am doing fine, I wrote this on Easter while really missing my husband this first year without him. Thank you for your understanding and insight in losing a mate. Blessings xxoo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/15/2021 10:24:00 AM

Although I'm not familiar with the form, your poem is sad but sweet. The reader can sense the great love you and your hubby shared. I hope this sensitive, loving poem earns a top spot in the contest. Hugs for you, Hon. Love, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/18/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn. I am keeping your brother in my prayers. I hope things are better? Blessings Love, Connie xxoo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2021 5:51:00 AM

This one tugs at the heartstrings, dear Connie, only time can heal the pain of your loss.. till then write on:) sending you hugs and prayers:)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/15/2021 10:20:00 AM

Thank you dear Jo. I am doing well, but just miss him very much. I am still handling his affairs. As soon as I sell his truck most will be taken care of. I am caring for my sweet granddaughter that we are homeschooling and that keeps me very busy. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo

Judy Ball

Date: 4/14/2021 11:47:00 PM

So much sadness and emotion in this piece Connie. Very touching. I hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/15/2021 3:25:00 AM

It helps knowing he is now free of pain. Thank you very much Judy. I hope you are well? Blessings xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/14/2021 7:37:00 PM

Hi Connie, You've penned such a well-written, touching write. I echo what Andrea said; you poured your feelings out this write. The love that you shared with your beloved is evident in this write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening-Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/15/2021 3:22:00 AM

My poem describes the way he was and I think the way he thought of himself too. Thank you Alexis. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/14/2021 2:52:00 PM

you did well with this form...so bittersweet are your words,but i can only imagine that emptiness... hugs and blessings

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/15/2021 3:18:00 AM

I am kept busy caring for my granddaughter we are homeschooling Sandra. Thank you very much. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2021 1:54:00 PM

I like how you put your feelings into this one. This form is so well suited for that. I think this form is amazing and so is your poem, Connie. I hope you are doing ok on your own. I know you are dealing with so many problems and that the muse was not with you lately, but let's hope it can return soon!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2021 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. It is good to be back reading poetry. My daughter, Michelle, encouraged me to get back into poetry. Have a great day. Blessings xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/14/2021 1:43:00 PM

The loss of a dear loved one is unimaginable Connie, but I know he lives on in your heart and the happy memories you made together. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2021 2:13:00 PM

We had a lifetime of love and lovely memories shared Tom. You are right. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/14/2021 1:41:00 PM

Connie, I am so sorry for your loss! I had no idea, but then I'm only recently back on the soup. Your poem is a loving and beautiful tribute to your husband. Blessings, Kim M

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2021 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim. We were together over 40 years. I still feel his presence at times. I hope you are well. Blessings xxoo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/14/2021 1:40:00 PM

Ah my friend, I've been homeless for four years now. Th memory is still there. The pain slightly less, but still felt. A lovely memorial for your husband.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2021 2:10:00 PM

I know time will help heal. I am sorry for your loss too dear Victor. Thank you. Blessings xxoo

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/14/2021 1:31:00 PM

a powerful expression of love lost... no words can express the understanding of your sadness my poetic friend...

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2021 2:09:00 PM

Thank you very much Frederic. I feel very fortunate to have my daughter and granddaughter living with me so I am not alone. Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/14/2021 12:58:00 PM

Elegant, poignant and heart wrenching my friend. So glad you are back to writing. There is depth here as you explore the many houses of loss and grief with your profound wisdom. Best wishes for the contest. Aloha and blessings for your "homeless heart."

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/14/2021 1:02:00 PM

Thank you very much Sam. I have my good days and bad in melancholy moods at times but I am doing well and have been very busy caring for my sweet granddaughter we are homeschooling. I hope you are well? Blessings xxoo