Home » Poems » Tim Smith » My Heart Beats For You

My Heart Beats For You

Walking aimlessly through the woods Searching for that spot we once stood Pouring out my heart and my tears Reliving memories of those special years Red and orange and purple from green Rich autumn colors, a sight to be seen The winds of change quickly blowing in With it a new chapter will soon begin Not ready to give up, I can't let go Where am I headed, where will I blow Lost without you, what am I to do Darling, my heart is still beating for you

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/30/2014 12:49:00 PM

I can relate to this one. I really like this poem. Going to my favs -JT

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2014 3:15:00 PM

Thank you JT my friend......Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 5:10:00 PM

Beautiful sad write. Hope you are in good spirits.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 5:13:00 PM

Yes I am my friend....I am just seeing a lot of death around so it has been on my mind... Cheers

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/29/2014 3:01:00 PM

sad touching yet very beautifully penned piece tim

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 3:40:00 PM

Thank you liam my friend...cheers

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/29/2014 8:16:00 AM

Tender, touching and painful at the same time! The heart deserves to be rewarded with love! Only when it let go the past the future comes! Very beautifully written, dear Tim!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/29/2014 3:47:00 PM

We all have been there, my friend BUT one day, very soon, you will find someone able to obliterate the past and you will be so grateful for that!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 3:39:00 PM

Thank you my friend...It is not easy to let go......Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/28/2014 8:53:00 PM

Where the wind will blow, the future will know, where the muses guide your poem, that's like coming home. Wonderful write Sweets, :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 9:35:00 PM

I want to go home.... Hugs Tim

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/28/2014 7:55:00 PM

Tim . . . Quite wonderful, quite emotional, quite sad, And Quite Well-Done!! Love is the driving force always. A "7" from me and this one's a FAV. Cheers and Spill Ink, Gary

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 9:33:00 PM

Thank you Gary...cheers Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2014 6:08:00 PM

Wonderful emotional write Tim and i love the imagery - the winds of change blowing in - oh how I relate to that. Wish I could give it a 10 guess 7 will have to do:-) Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/28/2014 6:27:00 PM

:-) :-) :-) Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 6:24:00 PM

Thanks Jan....I'll settle for the seven but you'll have to give me three hugs to make up the difference...hugs Tim xxx

Doris Jamoner

Date: 10/28/2014 4:24:00 PM

Ahwwww lots of emotions flowing through this poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 4:53:00 PM

Thank you Doris....hugs Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 10/28/2014 4:01:00 PM

Another poem a "7" will do can't see anything wrong with it again. Totally enjoy your writings. :) hugs eve

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 4:04:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend....hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/28/2014 3:57:00 PM

Ah Tim, are you missing Jan already?

Jan Allison
Date: 10/28/2014 6:03:00 PM

Hey I'm still around just in a different location but still on soup:-)hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 4:00:00 PM

Of course :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/28/2014 3:16:00 PM

Some people are too special to forget Tim,especially when We have fond memories of them .Very sad and deep-Charma

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 3:28:00 PM

Thank you sweetie......hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2014 2:48:00 PM

- "My Heart Beats For You" ....... yeah, I knew that !!! :))) - A beautiful and romantic poem my friend Tim !!!! - Never give up love!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 2:51:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend ....hugs Tim