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My Grandson, Tommy

TOMMY Blessed are the souls that sing; A smile their song, laughter their words, Whose hearts, though burdened, still take wing Like radiant sunbirds. Though Life could sink them with its weight, Or pinion them with care, And rein them Earthbound, chained by Fate, They much prefer the air. In their bright, empyrean flight, They carry us along, And we, like tag tails, hang on tight – Enchanted by their song.

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Date: 11/17/2020 10:55:00 AM
I see this was your most viewed poem, and it is delightful. Blessed are the souls that sing. What a delight it must be to have a grandson who takes you along on a carefree flight with a lighter than air soul. This lifted my spirits today. Stay inspired, Mary ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 11/17/2020 10:18:00 PM
My heart aches for your loss, Mary. Please accept my deep condolences.
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Mary Grace Dembeck
Date: 11/17/2020 12:35:00 PM
Once again, you are so kind, John. I dedicated this poem to my grandson, Tommy, because it emulates his spirit. He and I were very close. Tommy died at the age of 17 in an auto accident 8 years ago - (he was not the driver). It broke my heart, and I think about him every day and painted 4 pictures of him which hang in my daughter's (his mother's) house and in mine. I'm so glad my poem lifted your spirits, John. - Mary
Date: 5/8/2016 2:28:00 AM
Mary Grace Dembeck, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2015 10:27:00 PM
Mary, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Mary Grace Dembeck
Date: 11/28/2015 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, {{{SKAT}}} - Mary <3 + :)
Date: 11/23/2015 10:47:00 AM
A fine tribute to youth and high spirit. Congrats, daver
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Mary Grace Dembeck
Date: 11/28/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, {{{Daver}}}! - Mary :)
Date: 7/20/2015 9:56:00 AM
A great piece for your grandson you have penned here...7+!
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Mary Grace Dembeck
Date: 7/20/2015 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Hannington Mumo! :) --Mary
Date: 7/19/2015 3:58:00 PM
what a charming poem with lovely imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mary Grace Dembeck
Date: 7/19/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs to you, too! :) Mary xoxo
Date: 7/19/2015 1:54:00 PM
- Lovely for your grandson, Tommy ! - (I have 3: two boys + one girl) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mary Grace Dembeck
Date: 7/19/2015 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! (Aren't grandchildren WONDERFUL?!) :) -Love, Mary :)

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