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My Fantasy Dream

A Dream From My Past Was A FANTASY. Be patient I will take you where I have been from the beginning. One of those days was a lucky day When I heard a light tap on my Door Who is it I asked? Its me the post man. Oh dear I was murmuring what could it be? Step by step with my cane I arrived to open with shaky hands a young man with a smiling face was standing with an envelope in his hand ready to give it to me but I had to sign it first staring at him crying for help to stay as maybe it could be bad news or good news. I opened it and In there was a cheque of one million dollars I screamed young man I won the lottery I am a winner yesterday I bought a ticket with my last 2 dollars thank you please come back tomorrow I have a small surprise for you. My cry of happiness was heard by the drops of rain knocking on my window calling to ask when I am due to cache the money as they also were my friends awaiting for the happy event to the never ending journey of giving. My fantasy dream was fulfilled Oh! how good is The Lord to me. Now that I won I ran sat down got out my pen and paper and here I am writing today I am rich but tomorrow I will become poor as I will give away all the millions to the needy my family my friends everybody will share my richness. Good night my friends until tomorrow another day another dream. Therese Bacha 10/5/2013

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Date: 3/28/2013 8:40:00 AM
I loved this poem, very nice and enjoyed it alot. It made me wonder about that postman for a mnute LOL well done.
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Date: 2/22/2013 5:56:00 PM
what a very nice dream. Hmmm, i thought you were gonna have a party with that young postman!!! Then you could enter it into the spicy poetry contest. This was a very fun one of yours to read. I really liked it, my friend.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/22/2013 6:17:00 PM
Hellooo, busy busy reading poems? good for you..thank you Andrea, see you later...Love Terry xoxoxoxo
Date: 1/28/2013 10:40:00 PM
This was a good dream winning ,,,, I haven't seen you in a while it feels like. I so love reading your words/ poems ;} thank you for reading my "from Him" it was 1997, first six months we were together, 17 years with him, Yes I'm very OK now. I'm lonely though. Gotta find another man ,,, God Bless you Terry .
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/29/2013 7:33:00 AM
Such a beautiful woman like you should not find it hard to have someone, he must be a very lucky man to be with you..Where do you live Debbie.....I live in Canada Montreal.....have a nice day.Love Terry xoxo
Date: 1/22/2013 8:46:00 PM
can I be your friend? I enjoyed your poem Terry! Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/22/2013 8:58:00 PM
I noticed you haven't been writing? in 2013...take care xoxo Terry
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/22/2013 8:54:00 PM
Of course Ralph you are a friend...thank you so much....warm thoughts to you to....xooxox Have a nice evening..Terry
Date: 1/22/2013 12:12:00 AM
yep, this would be a fantasy come TRUE, wouldn't it? You are a lovely dreamer. by the way, I am 57 but thanks for your comment. I like to think I look a lot younger than that too!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/22/2013 6:27:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...have a wonderful day...Terry
Date: 1/21/2013 10:32:00 AM
your poem so vivid, one was in there, enjoying every second of your win...really like this
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/21/2013 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Harry so much by stopping by,,,Have a nice day. xoxo Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 9:27:00 PM
What a lovely fantasy that was!!! :) Therese...you are so sweet and kind in all your posts on my poems...I do wish you every good blessing...monetary or otherwise! :) HUGS HUGS HUGS!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 10:04:00 PM
Thank you ,,,,,Eileen i read your last poem, i hope your daughter has a safe trip,,, and if you need anything,,,,i am here for you,,,,Love Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 2:43:00 PM
WOW! What a fantasy. So it is not real - you didn't win the Million, How I wish you had. I'm still your friend , with, or without money. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 4:27:00 PM
You are so cute,,you are my friend with or without the million,,,,,hope you had a wonderful weekend..love Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by..Good to know that your son survived stage four cancer..Many do not..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Sara,,,it is a Blessing i know that God is with him. xoxo Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 8:22:00 AM
Therese a great entree for the contest, good luck...David
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 11:51:00 AM
Thank you David,,,, have a nice Sunday.xoxo Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 7:47:00 AM
if only hey , lovely fantasy I am sure shared by many xx
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thank you,,i felt good when i wrote it,,,,it a fantasy......xoxo Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 7:12:00 AM
It would have been a very, very pleasant experience ..... but we can only dream of such a day. - Good written my friend. - Luck in contest. - - Have a fine Sunday .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Anne,your smiling face is always a welcome,,,,Love Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 5:58:00 AM
Very nice poem, Terry, though a bit shattering at the end... glad to see from the ccomments below that your son is a survivor! In that sence, it seems that you have already won something far better than the lottery! Terry
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 11:55:00 AM
I changed the end as you were right,, as for my son thank you he is a miracle boy,,,,God was great,,, xoxo Terry
Date: 1/20/2013 3:41:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Terry!:D You have wonderful poems! Husna
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/20/2013 11:56:00 AM
Husna,,thank you so much,,,i will go now and visit your poems,xoxo Terry
Date: 1/19/2013 4:34:00 PM
Reads like a winner...Enjoyed reading today..At least we can have our dreams..I am sorry to hear about your son with the cancer..I am not sure that I understood correctly..Did he have chemo and is now a surviver?..Thanks for the stops by my work..Your kind reviews are encouraging..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/19/2013 7:55:00 PM
Sara, my son had the cancer 5 years ago,chemo for 5 months as he was stage 4, and thank God he is a survival, thank you so much for your concern, and your feelings. I hope we all win the lottery one day, it would be fun,,Love Terry xoxoxo see you tomorrow...
Date: 1/19/2013 1:28:00 PM
One highly commendable dream. Light & Love
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Therese Bacha
Date: 1/19/2013 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, hope to win the Fantasy contest. Have a nice weekend. Love Terry

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