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Sunlit Oak Forest by Kevin Hill When I lose my footing, my faith returns when he is near me. For, I belong to him and he to me. This is the way God created us to be. If he fell from the edge of winter, I would warm him in my embrace. If he stumbled below a crescendo of clouds clashing, I would comfort him until my words drifted off in exhausted sleep. If a full eclipse echoed darkness in his soul, I would be the light to guide him home, and I know he would be the same for me. I love the totality of him – the beauty and the darkness, weakness and strength. I would rather walk through a fading forest with him on treacherous earth of greenbrier and bramble than a smooth, picturesque path through evergreens alone. If his hand is holding mine, I am warm inside and more in love with him in every season of our journey. A heavy sky of gray and drizzling rain feels like a sunny day when he smiles at me. This is the life intended for us. My faith in God has never wavered, but it deepened when He gave me a lasting love. feet circle through dense woodland - I reach for your hand and find my way back home 7/15/20 Contest – My Faith Sponsor – Regina Riddle

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Date: 12/2/2022 7:28:00 AM
Amen, love this
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Date: 12/21/2020 8:41:00 AM
This is a "Beautiful" write and picture. I am walking down your path. Love It. Love your first line, "When I lose my footing, my faith returns when he is near me." So true. Enjoy your day with blessings.................
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:39:00 AM
I hope you are well. Write more!
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Date: 9/18/2020 2:17:00 PM
I love the painting of the path being lit by the sun as it winds through the forest - an allegory of life perhaps? Also love your words and how they poetically express the faith in God that lights our way and picks us up when we fall, as well as giving us a hope in eternity that drives us forward. Beautiful expression, Rhonda!
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Date: 8/7/2020 11:20:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Rhonda! What a overwhelming penned verse, Panagiota xx
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Date: 7/28/2020 2:18:00 AM
This is another fave for me Rhonda. I always know I am in for an enchanting experience whenever I visit a muse of yours. This one captivates my senses again. Congratulations on your win :) Much love!
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Date: 7/22/2020 7:14:00 PM
Nicely done Rhonda. Congrats and God Bless you.
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Date: 7/22/2020 7:41:00 AM
Congrats and you definitely a WINNER with this beauty. I LOVE it. It's a tremendously expressive and impressive writing that I truly adore. God bless you with many more beautiful writes. Poetry hugs, Gina
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Date: 7/17/2020 3:24:00 AM
"never wavered" - this is really saying something; amazing faith my friend. Wow! Fine job.
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Date: 7/16/2020 1:49:00 PM
You weave a beautiful tapestry! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/16/2020 1:05:00 PM
This is a special write Rhonda, so glad you posted this, something we can strive for to write like this, if for the contest a sure winner!
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Date: 7/15/2020 10:53:00 PM
So expressive, the image of reaching for God's hand. Superb haibun, Rhonda! Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 7/15/2020 7:03:00 PM
you know very few people can write passion filled poetry, that cannot be learned you are born with it my poetic friend...I'm fav this one
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