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My Devotion

Devotion is a very special word to me All of mine belongs to my wife She is my very soul you see The forever-true love of my life She removed all my pain and strife Speaking on devotion all I can say She is my every second of everyday For Trudy's contest

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Lawrence Ingle

Date: 11/16/2009 9:14:00 PM

Very loving and warmly written..she must also hold you special in her heart...Sorry it took me so long to thank you on my past featured poem of several months ago..Thanks...lawrence ingle in lou. ky.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/1/2009 1:45:00 PM

Brilliantly sweet! I will enjoy the day that I meet the man God destines for me to be with and for him to love me like that. Awesome write! Congratulations on your placement in Trudy's contest.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/1/2009 12:50:00 PM

Beautiful poem, wonderful tribute to a wife, congrats. on your hight placement. Regards: Déirdre

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/1/2009 8:11:00 AM

The last line says it all! Congratulations my "hitting the books" friend!!~ Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/1/2009 6:09:00 AM

Congrad's on your BIG win Mike! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2009 3:26:00 AM

Congratulations Michael on your win in Trudy's contest. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/1/2009 2:09:00 AM

Congrats of your success in Trudy's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/31/2009 11:21:00 PM

Michael, congratulations on your success in Trudy's contest...Raul

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/31/2009 9:54:00 PM

Michael, Congratulation for placing in my first contest! Loved your poem of devotion to you lovely bride! ~Trudy~

John Freeman

Date: 8/8/2009 5:37:00 PM

Michael a very special tribute to your special lady, God bless with many years to come, Sincerely Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/8/2009 10:55:00 AM

COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS. a good wife is indeed rare today. good luck in school study and do everything they say and you'll get all a's

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 8/8/2009 9:08:00 AM

Michael, may all of the women in this world find a love like what you have with your wife.... it is so amazingly beautiful how you write to and are inspired by her and your love of each other. Many many blessings and years to come for your writing and sharing with us. Hugs and I look forward to seeing your poem for the contest! I have to catch up with that today as my days went crazy a few weeks ago - recovery enroute. :) Off to enjoy the reading!

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/7/2009 4:48:00 PM

It is so inspiring to hear your love story, it is so apparent in every poem, that you have found true love. Love Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/7/2009 3:08:00 PM

Excellent love story you have going on here Michael. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2009 1:32:00 PM

Beautifully written of devotion. Sara