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I wander as I wonder just how far away to roam. Should I stop and ponder if I should have stayed at home. Don't know where I'm going, not sure where I've really been. The pay's no more for knowing about things I've never seen. But on I trudge without a map with no guide to lead the way. Maybe I should stop and nap. A brilliant way to spend a day. Make Me Laugh Contest Sponsored by Robert Haigh 02/23/2018

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Al Juman

Date: 7/10/2018 11:15:00 AM

Seems like I am always lost and napping. Just got up and its now after 12. Love you bring it to paper

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/10/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Al...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/6/2018 8:17:00 AM

This has a Dr Seuss feel to it. Well expressed.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/8/2018 12:38:00 PM

Thanks Richard, it was just for fun...

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 3/16/2018 11:47:00 PM

Love the lilt and quick movement, that swept me along."Not sure where been" . Been there, ...why so enjoyed this winner of your's. Congrats. bbn

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/20/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Barbara...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2018 6:12:00 PM

I really like this, and I see it got a win. SUPER!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/20/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Andrea...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/12/2018 12:41:00 AM

Excellent write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/20/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Ravi.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2018 2:03:00 PM

- A really fun ... and a brilliant day, Charlie :) - A great win - well deserved - Congratulations! - Do you remember Carl ... (he with the sexy swimsuit) .... now he's here again :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/2/2018 10:10:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/1/2018 10:19:00 PM

Amen, Charlie, I'm a huge fan of a nap. A great medicine for life's ills. Congrats! Regards, Viv

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/2/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thanks Viv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2018 8:14:00 PM

Love those last lines. They made the poem funny!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/2/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, hope it did...

Joseph May

Date: 3/1/2018 4:59:00 PM

Very nicely written Charlie...

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/2/2018 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Joseph...

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 3/1/2018 7:25:00 AM

Sounds like the most recent chapter of my life. Nice sardonic comment, written with poetic skill. Well done Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/1/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thanks Geoffey...

Harriet Shea

Date: 3/1/2018 4:56:00 AM

Excellent write.. Harriet Shea (Derena)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/1/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Derena...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/1/2018 12:29:00 AM

Made me smile, my grandma started walking 5 miles a day, we have no idea where the hell she is now!!!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/1/2018 10:37:00 AM

She'll turn up, probably could be lured back with a donut...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/28/2018 9:33:00 PM

Hi Charlie, congratulations on your placement in this contest, well deserved for this poem. It has a wonderful lilt to it and it made me laugh, as you wrote it to do. I have had such a night of laughter tonight. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/28/2018 10:52:00 PM

Thank you so very much Mike...