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My Darling

My darling, you know that I adore you. The pulchritude of your ways takes all discomfort from our days. My dear, you are the paragon of true. When my temper is blazing, with a revelation that you are near, in eight seconds it disappears. Your charisma is amazing. July 11, 2018 Rhyme Time 5, Lucky 8 Contest By Laura Loo Rhyme ABBACDDC - WORDS: Revelation, Pulchritude, Adore, Discomfort, Paragon, Charisma, Blazing, Eight First Place

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/1/2018 1:37:00 AM

Congratulations, Susan on your first position win.

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/30/2018 6:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Deserving of first place.

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/31/2018 4:41:00 PM

Thank you! :)

John Gondolf

Date: 7/30/2018 11:58:00 AM

Susan, just stopping back by to say congrats on your win. John

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/30/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thanks, John!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/13/2018 10:22:00 PM

WELL COMPOSED SUSAN. ALL THE BEST

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/14/2018 7:38:00 AM

Thank you.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2018 9:31:00 PM

What a superb piece and excellent application of the 8 super-challenging words! It;s already a winner! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/13/2018 9:42:00 PM

Why thank you! :)

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/13/2018 8:21:00 PM

With a revelation you are near In 8 seconds it disappears Your charisma is amazing. I can totally relate to this. I can make any women dissapear in probably under 8 seconds flat. My charisma is so amazing but it comes as a revelation to anyone near me

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/13/2018 10:16:00 PM

Cheers Susan humor is the best medicine so they say, a lot of women often tell me I am funny but it is generally when I am trying to chat them up and have asked them for there number then they really find me funny

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/13/2018 9:42:00 PM

Lol, the temper disappeared. You're so funny! Thanks for reading and commenting.