My Color

You captured my heart , the essence of my charm the depth of my mind You are an artist! Nature is enamoured Black or white You give them dimensions. You are an artist! If I ever become your inspiration let me not sleep in your thoughts Paint me with all the colours You have My color is red! ...the color of your heart ... 22.9.13 @ 3.06 am

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/11/2016 8:29:00 AM

It seems I am drawn back to this one once again. Have a great weekend.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/19/2016 6:13:00 PM

Light and airy creation of love.

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:11:00 AM

Love and Insomnia are great ingredients for writing, you cooked up something tasty here.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/28/2016 8:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again.

Red Fiery
Date: 2/28/2016 8:48:00 AM

Thank you Richard:)I love to see your comments. ..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2013 6:44:00 PM

Hi Red, Thanks for the visits and comments. Not much time today but I did want to say Hello

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/27/2013 10:38:00 AM

One sad aspect of not being able to have time to spend here as i once had,, is i miss so many wonderful poem, and poets such as you Red, this is lovely....

Red Fiery
Date: 9/27/2013 11:03:00 AM

Harry you are a wonderful poet too and i missed ur visit...glad that u finally arrived..!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2013 11:40:00 AM

maybe you can write about yellow someday.. love that color, and orange too!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2013 11:39:00 AM

heartwarming with hues that are etched on the canvas of love, red... splendid!..:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2013 7:36:00 PM

Perfect! 7 for sure.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/23/2013 3:33:00 AM

THATS MY COLOUR HA HA IT IS MY FAVORITE BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/22/2013 6:28:00 AM

Wow, you said so much with so little words. What is fecundity? Not part of my vocabulary, if I am in the majority of people on that point you may wish to consider an alternate word to prevent distracting from the rest of the piece. I do however love this piece and was thrilled to read a couple of new ones, thanks for letting me know. Hugs Rick.