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My Childlike Eyes

These childlike eyes will make you smile... Lift your heart up to the sky,if only for a while... These childlike eyes can steal your pain... Raise up your dreams and keep you sane... These childlike eyes have a different view... The colors are bright and the words remain true... These childlike eyes do cry at times... But they disappear on paper with my rhymes...

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Constance La France

Date: 2/20/2011 6:59:00 AM

Awe yes, and I did comment on this poem once, I always say within me dwells the little girl I was, some say to feel good, just talk to a child, it is that unconditional openness they give that is so beautiful, as your poem is, in my job as Geriatric Nurse, the frail elderly have this same childlike mindset and it is beautiful to embrace, the circle of life is clear and divine~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2011 2:53:00 PM

Sensitive and so sweet and romantic my White Knight.. very touching Couplet lines Michael.. so very appreciative of my 2nd place in your wonderful contest for "THREESOME".. means so much that u enjoy my writing as I do your.. Jersey Girl forever with luv..

Constance La France

Date: 1/30/2011 7:16:00 PM

Thank you for commenting on my blog today and this poem is terrific, I really like that last stanza~~

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/30/2011 3:22:00 PM

If this is your reality, Michael..Rosanna has an angel...keep those eyes and your heart.. God bless you always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/30/2011 2:51:00 PM

Wish, everyone has those childlike eyes and poetic talent to make it disappear, michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2011 1:06:00 PM

If you can see the world around you through the eyes of a child, you are a very lucky man, Michael. Such a beautiful poem. I especially love the last verse. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2011 11:02:00 AM

ohhh, michael.. this gracious write allows me to be a child again.. how endearing!! winning streaks for you if for a contest! : )huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/30/2011 9:47:00 AM

btw I am giving myself 30 mins tops here at the Soup-- hahaha wish me luck-- it's almost 2am here-- yeah I forgot Craziest Loony-- yiikes that is scary to be!! O_o

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/30/2011 9:45:00 AM

Well, may your childlike eyes forever twinkle, Michael-- I think the gleam that children have in their eyes are the best-- and you know why? Since the sparkle of life is just Alive! so lucky you for having childlike eyes-- may it never dim for you! and ahh what pray tell does "CL" mean?? Curious Loony? Coolest Loony? or maybe just maybe Creative Loony? Cackling Loony? Cruelest Loony? choose well, my friend-- choose well-- haha-- thanks for always making me smile as well :D enjoyed this a lot!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/30/2011 9:15:00 AM

I have been hearing my whole life "when are you going to grow up" well at 45 going on 46 nothing has changed , or will. "My Childlike Eyes" won't ever change...Enjoy your Sunday Soup!!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/30/2011 9:11:00 AM

This is a beauty in so many ways Michael.. An a favorite of mine, see you have me smiling again.. love Wilma

Daver Austin

Date: 1/30/2011 9:05:00 AM

Very simple and sweet. An adoring father? Love, Dave