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My Childhood Home

I lived in a rural area until I was twenty years old. My home was adjacent to a farm where corn was grown and locally sold. Maples and pine trees clustered across from the uneven country road. I can still remember fragrance of flowers and pine that smelled so softy pretty. This pastoral scene was not far from the city. Only a few houses were near. Occasionally was spotted a rabbit or deer. A small number of cars passed. In the evening, their lights, amidst pitch darkness were cast. Unforgettable was the sight of fire flies blinking with their evening light. A stream ran along a group of trees; a place forbidden, but as you know, that is exactly where children go. It was a few yards from the only childhood home I’ve known. My brother placed a board across the stream below. I was coaxed to go; moving cautiously slow. I trusted him; that is why, I still try. Not too far away was a little general store. The size did not matter, for there were candies and goodies galore. My sister and I engaged in all sorts of talk, as we took this freeing countryside walk. The threesome could sometimes be found playfully leaped around, and picked blackberries when seasonally found. The house was quite small in size, and of three bedrooms comprised; my parents’, the one shared by my sister and me, and the other, for my brother. The dwelling still lives in my unconscious mind; I’m still there in dreams, where reality is blind. Arguments blemished the space, with memories stuck fast in place. There are also glimpses strong, where laughter belonged. That was the place where a dog named, Brownie, was born and lived thirteen years. My sister, older brother and I, with the saddest of tears, placed his large white tin bowl over his memory site. His name on the bottom; I was assigned to write. About two decades ago, the house was taken down without glory; part of my bitter- sweet childhood story. A spiritless group of professional offices now stand, on grounds, that once was my family's home and land. 09-04-15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 1:17:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 10/22/2015 2:43:00 PM
Skat, Your positive comments are always very appreciated. Barbara
Date: 10/18/2015 7:06:00 AM
It is sad to see a childhood home destroyed and a new building take its place. But at least you have the memories. Excellent winnng entry Barbara. Congratulations on your super win!
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 10/18/2015 2:53:00 PM
Connie, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your positive comments. Barbara

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