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My Canvas

With broad brushstrokes I paint my life The colours I choose are preordained The canvas is long and wide, polar white I start from the beginning as well I might With careful regard for every detail I paint the canvas with extra care My colours blur and blend to tell the tale Of a life so short put up for sale In the midst of colours vibrant and bright Is a patch deep and dark, nearly a stain As the canvas tells the story, it does hold true The darkness is a rough patch, searching for a new The middle of the canvas is colourful and bright With much left untouched, story yet to be told If it is true that sunshine follows rain The next page of my life will have all been worth the pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 11/30/2008 1:07:00 PM
A very artistic, colorful poem. Well deserved to be featured this week! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/29/2008 9:54:00 PM
Christian - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/25/2008 4:20:00 PM
What an artistic way to share your thoughts. Much to think about in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:23:00 PM
Congrats Christian on "My Canvas" being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations Christian on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful writing being featured this week. Love,Carol
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