Mute Swan

you are my mute swan your flight path towards my song let my tune seduce 25/07/2018

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/19/2018 4:26:00 PM

Exquisitely beautiful ... wonderful work, Jean! :-) <3

Jean Murray
Date: 8/19/2018 5:14:00 PM

These wonderful encouraging comments from the guy at the top mean so much to me Greg. I have been struggling to find inspiration for a long while now. Comments like these give me the kick in the ass I need to keep trying. Much appreciated.

Warren Doll

Date: 8/11/2018 4:15:00 PM

Such a beautiful concept and image. Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 8/11/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you Warren. It's always lovely to know people are reading my poems.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2018 10:57:00 PM

This is lovely Jean and a winner! Congratulations! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 7/30/2018 1:22:00 AM

Good morning Connie. It's nice to know I can still come up with them. Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2018 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations, Jean, this is so magical!

Jean Murray
Date: 7/29/2018 5:14:00 PM

So sweet of you to say so Michelle. Thank you.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/28/2018 5:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Interesting haiku. :)

Jean Murray
Date: 7/28/2018 5:34:00 PM

Thank you. They say opposites attract Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2018 8:15:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/28/2018 3:06:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Ditto!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2018 3:02:00 PM

Jean, congratulations on your awesome 5th place win. This is so beautiful... Hugs Eve

Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Eve. I hug you back.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/27/2018 6:28:00 AM

Lovely piece Jean! Congrats on your win :) xomo

Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Maureen.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/27/2018 5:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Line. Love must be in my air....

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/27/2018 4:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, what wonderful imagery in this haiku.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2018 5:28:00 AM

Thank you for the placement Tania.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/26/2018 8:18:00 AM

What can I say... I'm busy flying your way... Just keep singing... All the best Jean

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2018 8:35:00 AM

One of the sweetest comments ever Artouo.x

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/25/2018 10:49:00 PM

I appear to be gliding smoothly towards you, Jean, but underneath I'm paddling furiously and I'm missing a shoe :( . Lovely little write. Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2018 12:35:00 AM

Typical you!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/25/2018 8:41:00 PM

Oh, a beautifully seductive and vibrant haiku, Jean. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2018 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/25/2018 6:22:00 PM

Well done, Jean..they are inspirational to look at.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2018 6:25:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Indeed they are.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/25/2018 5:43:00 PM

well done, jean! i enjoyed...

Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2018 6:24:00 PM

Thank you Ilene.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2018 5:07:00 PM

lovely lines Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2018 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Jan. Big hug goodnight.