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*written from the perspective of a man 60 years of age*

Ah, the wistful daydreams about my lost youth! Astride upon a white stallion, riding into a distant past I miss youth like a barren, parched desert misses pouring rain I wish I could coax father time into restoring my vernal exuberance My aging body is starting to betray me. I can't see quite as clearly I can't move as quickly. And I sure can't run up the stairs as fast As I used to. My memory isn't quite as sharp anymore. Each morn I awake, full of aches and pain. I'm a squeaky wheel in need of grease You needn't strain your eyes to see what my age wants you to see I have greying hair, crows feet, lines across my forehead, the works My testosterone is shot to smithereens. My virility is steadily waning But who's complaining? I'm loving life. There's a lot of it left to live, still Aging is hard to accept, but I must. I see my wrinkles In the mirror, and I smile because I wear them well. I'm still me! No one stays young forever. I am but a flower no longer blooming As beautifully in springtime, but c'est la vie. I'm still thriving! Youthful folks may deride and dismiss me as over the hill... A Phoenix with clipped wings, thrashing about the ashes Sucking me in like quicksand, but I'm still alive and kicking Look how far I've made it! I have something they envy---wisdom! Submitted for... Strand Select 2 Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest(Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/01/2019 A Contest On Aging Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by: Emile Pinet Date written and posted: 06/02/2019

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Date: 1/4/2020 9:23:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/4/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thanks again, Eve:-)
Date: 1/3/2020 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/4/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, Eve:-)
Date: 1/3/2020 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/3/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brenda:-)
Date: 1/3/2020 7:27:00 AM
An amazing rendering Edward, about aging that we face, and my compliments on your 1st place win my friend~~FAVE~@wk
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/3/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much for the congrats and fav, William:-) Happy new year!
Date: 6/27/2019 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your highly deserved 2nd placing! I had actually placed top 3 in one of your own contests a few months ago and I was pleasantly surprised to see that you had entered this contest as well! Though I did not place in this contest, I am not discouraged at all! Again, congratulations! I do quite enjoy your work, sir!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/27/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Jeffrey:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2019 3:44:00 PM
Wonderful poem on the process of growing old , Edward, congratulations on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/26/2019 4:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Date: 6/26/2019 1:31:00 PM
I can identify with so much of this brilliantly written poem Edward! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/26/2019 3:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie:-)
Date: 6/26/2019 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations Edward! Your poem has placed "Second" in my contest. It was a very competitive contest and therefore difficult to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/26/2019 3:14:00 PM
Wow, I wasn't expecting to place so high! So honored. Thank very much, Emile:-) Most obliged
Date: 6/3/2019 8:18:00 AM
Your poem was so inspiring that I felt the need to enter. I wish you well in the contest!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2019 5:28:00 PM
I'm glad my poem inspired you, Ralph:-) Good luck in the contest as well!
Date: 6/2/2019 6:31:00 PM
Yes, wisdom with age! Enjoyed the write!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/2/2019 11:52:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:-)

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