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Music of the Night

Essence of night graces senses on balcony caressed in fairest moon. A serenade of longing scrolls over depths of love downstream to the Adriatic. All prudence portrayed in austere daylight, forbid love. Yet, darkness holds music flowing to paramour’s heart. Starry-eyed, an ethereal sonnet climbs rose trellis to touch poetic soul destined to dim as operatic dreams surrender to eternity. Written 6/20/20 Contest – On Broadway Sponsor – Nette Onclaud

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/25/2020 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful song, write and picture. Enjoy your win and day writing away................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/23/2020 1:09:00 PM

Ah, Romeo and Juliet emerge in the elegance of your words. Congratulations on your winning placement, Rhonda. This is lovely.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/21/2020 4:17:00 PM

Lovely piece Rhonda with such fine imagery too. Have a blessed day, Gordon

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:26:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2020 2:44:00 PM

Just gorgeous!! (I tried to find the temple song but had no idea what that one was)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/23/2020 10:08:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I checked it out. The Temple song is from Jesus Christ Superstar. I'll come see which one you chose. :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2020 2:21:00 PM

wow, such beauty in these lines

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:40:00 PM

Thanks, Jack, for the kind words! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Silent One

Date: 6/21/2020 10:26:00 AM

Oh wow... A shirt poem but some mane great lines... Great choice of words...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:38:00 PM

Thank you, Silent! Blessings. Rhonda xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/21/2020 7:56:00 AM

You have a special way of weaving words. I expect this will do well in Nette’s contest. Hugs Rick.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:37:00 PM

Thanks, Rick! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/21/2020 7:09:00 AM

Outstanding writing dearest, Rhoda. Hugs xxx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:36:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2020 10:21:00 PM

I love this poem Rhonda. I have gone to see Phantom of the Opera twice here in Hawaii. I love the music. Your poem is outstanding! I hope Nette loves it too! I hope you enjoy Happy Father's Day tomorrow. I just posted a Hawaiian video you may enjoy at a blog at Poetry Soup. Check it out if you have the time. Aloha, Connie xxoo

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, for your kind comments! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/20/2020 10:15:00 PM

Charm and romance abound in this magical verse, which brings to my mind, Romeo and Juliet.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:34:00 PM

Thanks, Evelyn! Yes. I was thinking of Romeo and Juliet when writing this one. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/20/2020 6:39:00 PM

This poem is really good, it touches the senses, very impressive write, dear poet

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thank you, Frederic...so kind of you! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2020 2:29:00 PM

How enchanting is the essence of the night! Charming, delightful write, Rhonda.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 8:27:00 PM

Thank you for all your kind visits, Vijay ! Blessings, Rhonda xx