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Mr Moon

The silver moon shines Shimmering over the sea Lighting up shadows Stirring right inside of me Watching waves drift on the shore The night sky dances With the gentle silver face Holding hands with stars This scene, my eyes have embraced Watching life drift in the night For contest : moonlight dream By Emma Buckeridge Tanka form

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Skat A

Date: 1/25/2016 7:38:00 PM

EMMA, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/5/2011 2:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win x

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 8:58:00 AM

Well penned Emma. Congratulations on your win.

Annabelle Jane

Date: 11/29/2011 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful... you and i clearly share a love of the night sky! x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2011 2:14:00 PM

I like "Mr. Moon" We have the same moon i Norway too. Love Anne-Lise

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/29/2011 1:57:00 PM

enjoyed reading....

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/29/2011 1:53:00 PM

* "And I See Your Beauty * As An Angel Standing Upon That Gentle Shore * Stars Smiling At You * Knowing, One Day You Shall Be Theirs to Keep * Joy * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *