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Mourning My Dads Death

Blessed was I to be a thread of love sown by you. Growing up, I was pleased you thought me your twin flair. Losing you was the worst heart dark I ever knew. For years, my grief over you seemed too much to bear. After you died all of nature's colors seemed blue. The morn you turned breathless my silence screamed aimless. I prayed a fathomless numbness would mercy brew. Seeing you die, I ground curled and cried out shameless. Twenty years have grown beautiful Dad love to view. I know your image will stay whole in love clear air. Now, when birds sing on green days made sunshiny new, I full embrace the joys from death's painful despair. ... CayCay February 28, 2010

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Date: 3/15/2020 2:04:00 PM
so glad to see this with a first place, Caycay. Congrats, and thinking of you.
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Date: 3/11/2020 1:41:00 AM
Beautiful, CayCay, congratulations on your first place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/11/2020 1:38:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your father... Congrats on your great win Cay..
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Date: 3/10/2020 11:37:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations for your beautiful top win :)
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Date: 3/10/2020 5:50:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance
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Date: 3/10/2020 12:09:00 PM
Great win for this lovely tribute to your beloved father, CayCay. It never gets easy but we do feel blessed to have those memories of our special times together. Congrats on your #1 ~ John
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Date: 2/29/2020 9:46:00 PM
Hello CayCay … the sting of death never really heals but time and nature have a way of helping to understand. A really nice tribute for your Dad, CayCay - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 2/29/2020 8:33:00 PM
Lovely tribute, CayCay, as you weave the words into the fabric of your heartfelt message. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/29/2020 11:36:00 AM
Youur dad will be proud of this tribute to him - he knows exactly what you have written and how deep your love was and is for him because he is your guardian asngel. I love this poem. Blessings and love, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/29/2020 9:53:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to your dad. You are blessed to have enjoyed such a rich relationship. Hugs and sorry for your loss Cay Cay.
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:08:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your father, this is a beautiful tribute..
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Date: 2/28/2020 7:48:00 PM
This speaks volumes of your abiding love for him, Caycay. How wonderfully you were inspired by Dear Heart's ten words to write this tribute for your dad. LOVE YOU, lady!!!
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Date: 2/28/2020 4:22:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your father and your love for him CayCay.
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Date: 2/28/2020 1:26:00 PM
Poignant, beautifully written poem, CayCay. I'm so sorry for your loss. Your poem speaks to my soul because I've also lost my father. He passed almost 3 years ago and I still miss him like crazy! I wrote a poem about him recently called "You Never Left". I think that poem will speak to you as well. The pain of loss never goes away, but it's something we learn to live with. Best of luck in Constance's contest! It's a winner in my book:-)
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Date: 2/28/2020 11:46:00 AM
It's been a little over 20 years for me too, CayCay, but yet it still seems as if it were only yesterday. I was there when he took his last breath and to this day still get choked up. With his bare hands, he molded and shaped me into who I am today. I've moved on but the past is only one second behind. I guess you can see where your poem took me. Good luck!
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