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Mother's Womb

in her waiting room we wait in amniotic air we incubate and emerge with a surge in a birthful purge one month after eight (April 9 2016)

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Date: 4/17/2016 1:20:00 AM

Wow!! As a midwife I can relate. I give this an eight!!

Date: 4/12/2016 5:10:00 PM

The way you write 9 months is quite unique. Nice tinkering , SuZ

J. Tudor
Date: 4/12/2016 6:49:00 PM

It was the only way I could make it work! Thank you Suzanne. J.

Date: 4/9/2016 2:06:00 PM

very creative J tudor really enjoyed:-)hugs Jan xx

J. Tudor
Date: 4/9/2016 2:42:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan, I'm pleased you found enjoyment. :) J.

Date: 4/9/2016 11:56:00 AM

wow, this is very clever and creative J, well written :)-luloo

J. Tudor
Date: 4/9/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Laura...procreation is the most cleverest thing of all! :) J.