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Motherly Mug My son’s first love the break up it was heart breaking It had come to shove and no longer for the taking was My daughter in the making to me most caring Feminine not faking Hindsight - I was overbearing So keen was I for this here dating Considered future mating Granny in the making What fool am I yearning for this thing How dare I cry that is not the way a daughter’s true love comes by

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Date: 5/22/2016 2:46:00 AM
Very Beautiful Fiona....
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:16:00 AM
I agree with you Fiona, I was moved by your poem. SKAT
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Date: 3/21/2016 7:46:00 PM
wow, this is a deep write, Fiona. enjoyed. LINDA
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Fiona Callaghan
Date: 3/22/2016 3:57:00 PM
Many thanks Linda for your comments. I am very new to writing and feedback from other writers is exactly what I need, I never thought I'd ever show my work to anyone! I will definitely be taking the time to read your poems. Thanks again. Fiona

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