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Mother Nature

"Join hands to sweep clean of all dirt and preserve the pristine beauty of Nature to enhance the quality of living. If not, fear her lashing us black and blue" -by poet
Nature, you are God’s lovely creation, Dressed in grandeur, decked in regal beauty You give us much scope for recreation, Preserving your grace becomes our duty Poets chant and sing in honor of you, Sages withdraw to your silence serene, Beasts and birds have found you as their sweet home, Men find their sustenance and thrive on you, Dales and hills – add to your bright sheen The sky with its stars form your golden dome Dark forests and running brooks lend you charm, Deep Ravines spell your profound mystery. It’s our duty to save you from all harm Sometimes you baffle with your trickery Always kind you are, yet some brutish men, Dismally assault you, they maim and mar, They suck your life sap – they leave you dry, They keep on committing sin after sin Your beautiful frame, to pieces they tear With their selfish acts, badly mortify You were once so temptingly beautiful You could amaze and take our breath away Looked so elegant, lovely and graceful In scenic beauty, you could proudly sway You were Princess of royal lineage Been decked in brilliantly colorful shade But your thankless children carelessly spread Toxic fumes, carbon and dirty garbage And all your wealth they callously invade They will ooze out your blood and cast you dead! May.4.2022 Form O-Ode- New Poems Poetry Contest Topic... Nature Syllable Count-10 per line Sponsor- Constance La France

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Date: 6/10/2022 6:45:00 AM
Valso, wonderful nature poem and congratulations on your win in my Ode contest, I like your quote also, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 6/2/2022 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win , Valsa, in Constance's Ode. Nature an Art of our Lord. Blessings my friend
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Date: 6/1/2022 8:30:00 PM
Might be owing your literary background, your poems have high poesy. This too is an example. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/1/2022 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 6/1/2022 10:28:00 AM
Valsa, your dramatic ode could easily be recited as a Greek play! It is eloquent, elegant and graceful with a powerful wallop at the end. Truly, nature is a gift from God in all the beauty we take drink in refreshing us and yet, we have no problem ravishing her and leaving her for dead. How blessed are we that God gives her restorative powers when we cultivate them. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 5/21/2022 6:14:00 AM
A beautiful Ode to Nature, Dear Valsa. You have expressed your heartfelt love for serene Nature - it’s definitely a shame that we are destroying our planet with all natural gifts by being ignorant and careless. Dear Poet, continue writing such touching poems which will be appreciated by many readers. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 5/5/2022 3:15:00 PM
Excellent poem and form, Valsa. Your message was thankful and a wakeup call to humanity. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt thoughts through your gift of poetry. Good luck in the contest my friend, Bill
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Date: 5/4/2022 7:20:00 PM
i do love nature and have tasted Her unbridled side with awe...love the capture of serenity in this poem...it is the calmness in the next day of a hurricane that is a treasure seeing all the death and destruction knowing we pick up from there and it is all returned in extra measure....thank you
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Date: 5/4/2022 11:37:00 AM
Arizona was once a land of enchantment but has become a cemetery filled with monuments to exhausted mining ventures. The government guaranteed the land would be restored, but the mining companies claim they did not earn enough to pay for restoration and taxpayers won't fund the clean-up, so it is left for the First Resurrection. Good write, Valsa! Aloha!
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Date: 5/4/2022 6:25:00 AM
Kudos my friend for this phenomenal write. Excellent vocabulary shines this difficult to execute form. Power of your gifted words shower well deserved praise on nature-- and a warning to mankind. A definite FAVE for me.
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Date: 5/4/2022 6:09:00 AM
A very powerful poem, Valsa. You captured an exquisite way of praising God through his creation on earth and around us, in the cosmos. Your imagery is wonderful. I wish you the best luck in the contest. Blessings
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Date: 5/4/2022 2:46:00 AM
After the Old Testament, God did not punish mankind but allowed him to punish himself for his disobedience.
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Date: 5/3/2022 11:23:00 PM
O great Song of Praise, to God for creation & Nature. I see mining & forestry industry -- in destroy= in destroy -- and feel deep gashes in my being, imagining mother earth feels both weight & blades if giant equipment. ThanX my sister in Jesus
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Date: 5/3/2022 10:27:00 PM
But mother nature will fight back as we're seeing with fires, floods and pandemics and they won't stop until mankind starts showing more respect. Powerful verse Valsa and good luck. Tom
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